This is lovely. A hard story but still a beautiful one. And even though it's supposed to be just sex, there's a something underneath it all, and that's what really caught me.
*sigh* In so many ways this tinged with sadness, but the ending rings with hope and some promise. (I'm glad you said he doesn't NOT love him - there IS a difference, and I don't feel the need to smack Sirius upside the head anymore! *g*)
Such beautiful, descriptive language! It's amazing how such a short piece can be so deep and so moving. I don't know that I'd exactly classify it as PWP either.
Well, it's not like not having "enough" porn was a BAD thing - not when the writing is so good! *g* I was thinking more towards the 'too much plot' to be considered PWP! LOL
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Oh, I loved that!
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They don't pretend they have time.
Think, speak, articulate, type, spell, read, whimper, forget, Gah.
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Thanks for reading.
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Wonderful!
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Such beautiful, descriptive language! It's amazing how such a short piece can be so deep and so moving. I don't know that I'd exactly classify it as PWP either.
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Thanks! And no, it isn't really PWP (NOT ENOUGH PORN!), but it's as close as I could label it.
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