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The Last of the Lost

Mar 31, 2014 08:01

Title: The Last of the Lost.
Fandom: Sherlock
Pairing: John/Sherlock
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Violence, possibly disturbing themes
Word Count: 5000
Disclaimer: In no way mine, or anything to do with me, I own nothing.
Summary: It's easy to make excuses when you forget that you're a monster
AN: The third story in the challenge I'm doing with goldenusagi to ( Read more... )

sherlock, word count: 5000-10000, rating: pg-13, sherlock: john/sherlock, genre: slash

Comments 6

goldenusagi March 31 2014, 07:37:06 UTC

Sherlock is a bit creepy and terrifying in this. John has a right to be freaked out.

I do like the added knife fight. It ups the stakes and makes the whole thing feel more dire.

entangled_now March 31 2014, 07:41:26 UTC

Thank you! I thought I'd make him a bit more sinister in this one. It seemed to fit the theme.

I enjoyed writing the fight scene, action is always fun, so I'm happy you thought it worked.

enigmaticblues March 31 2014, 13:49:28 UTC

I really liked this, and I liked that there isn't an easy answer here. It felt very unsettling.

entangled_now March 31 2014, 19:18:49 UTC

Thank you! I thought this one probably wouldn't go as smoothly as other supernatural/mythical creatures. I'm glad you thought it worked.

thiefofcamorr April 12 2014, 14:24:59 UTC

I've been away for a while, and this was such a treat to come back to :D Thank you for writing so marvellously, and I love how it ends. Unsettling, and they're left hanging a bit, very realistically.

entangled_now April 15 2014, 07:00:10 UTC

Thank you very much, you always say such nice things. I'm glad you enjoyed it.