That was great. I liked that you expanded on what happened after Hutch dumped the water on Starsky. It wasn't fluffy at all! It was intense with Hutch scared but wanting Starsky and Starsky knowing he loved Hutch and wanted him as well. Thanks.
Thank you so much - I'm very glad (relieved?) it's not too soapy. :-) I tend that way, though I want to write gritty stuff. I'm so glad you liked it and didn't find it too mushy.
Framing Starsky’s face, he admitted, “I’m not tough when it comes to you.” Guh! I loved this! I've missed your writing. You have them down pat, you know theses guys, you channel theses guys! I want more. Well done!
Comments 22
Reply
Reply
(The comment has been removed)
Reply
(The comment has been removed)
Reply
Reply
Reply
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment