Comments | licensedfanboy: YA Fic: The sun has spread its wings, Part 8

licensedfanboy

YA Fic: The sun has spread its wings, Part 8

Sep 20, 2006 00:08

Jeez, I can't believe I'm done sharing this with you guys. This is the "official" end of this piece, but there's a little epilogue that'll be following shortly. I just want to think everyone that's been reading: Thank you guys so much for indulging me; Allan Heinberg and Jim Cheung created these amazing characters, and I'm just having a blast ( Read more... )

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kirke_novak September 20 2006, 08:03:14 UTC

Oh my God! The ending! Twisty, twisty much?! This I did NOT expet at all! I 've totally forgotten that Marrow was ordered to kidnap Billy.
*waits for the epilogue*

licensedfanboy September 20 2006, 22:02:07 UTC

Hahahaha, I'm so glad I managed to surprise you! I hope it still made sense though and wasn't completely out of left field. Thank you so much for reading, hope the epilogue gives a little more resolution!

eye_infections September 20 2006, 13:35:30 UTC

omgakjdklhoiwhfaljdgn!!! I loved that ending!

licensedfanboy September 20 2006, 22:02:32 UTC

Hahaha, thank you! And thank you for reading, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

yalover September 20 2006, 13:53:22 UTC

Buh guh? huh? I think you broke my brain with the suprise twist....wow. I am seriously impressed with your imagination here. Looking forward to the epilouge curious as to what form Billy's "quiet" spell will take.

licensedfanboy September 20 2006, 22:03:27 UTC

Thank you! Hahaha, I was kind of worried that I was telegraphing the twist a little too much, so I'm glad to hear that I still caught some people by surprise! Ooh, and the quiet spell...well, you'll see. Thank you for reading!

brak666 September 20 2006, 14:16:38 UTC

Great story. Love the twist at the end. Though someone needs to tell Kang that doing evil things to avoid becoming evil is a little counterproductive.

licensedfanboy September 20 2006, 22:05:09 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm stoked you enjoyed it. Hahaha, yeahhh, Kang's a little mixed up. Then again, if I was a teenager who found out that his future self was a maniacal supervillain and then found out that there was no way to avoid that fate, I'd end up a little twisted too. I think that he thinks that he has good reason to do what he's doing. Thank you for reading, again, I so appreciate it.

amarin_rose September 20 2006, 15:40:38 UTC

Gah. Whoa. Was not expecting that. So is there really a Vision, or was it Kang all along? Ooh, mama, can't wait to find out.

Also, is Billy mute now?

licensedfanboy September 20 2006, 22:06:55 UTC

Ah, I hope the epilogue answers some of those questions for you. Unfortunately, I'm going to warn you now that it's not exactly a completely tidy resolution. So stoked that you've been reading, I really appreciate it.