Comments | licensedfanboy: YA Fic: The sun has spread its wings, Epilogue

licensedfanboy

YA Fic: The sun has spread its wings, Epilogue

Sep 22, 2006 00:06

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Teddy peeked into Billy’s room, grinning as he saw his sleeping boyfriend. The dark-haired boy was sprawled across his bed shirtless, the afternoon sun gilding him in burnished gold.

He toed his shoes off as he walked over ( Read more... )

fic, young avengers, the sun has spread its wings

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licensedfanboy October 7 2006, 07:21:38 UTC

Hahahaha, did you ever end up being able to get them off that thing I told you about? Ooh, and sorry I've been MIA, classes are destroying me right now.

amarin_rose September 22 2006, 16:03:12 UTC

The only bad thing I have to say about this is *sniff* it's over. Wonderfully done, kept me on the figurative edge of my seat. Know that if you write a sequel - or anything else in this fandom - I'll be first in line to read it! :D

licensedfanboy October 7 2006, 07:22:02 UTC

Thank you so much for the kind words, I really really appreciate it.

amarin_rose October 7 2006, 18:01:29 UTC

I feel it is my duty to ensure that great new writers get the encouragement they need to continue writing.

Otherwise I'll soon run out of new fic to read. :P

fullmetal_cute September 22 2006, 17:43:00 UTC

*joins in the demands for a sequel. Cause it has to happen. The hellspork commands it. Cause this is just too good, and there are too many left-dangling type things floating about for there not to be*

licensedfanboy October 7 2006, 07:22:31 UTC

Hahaha, there miiight be a sequel, but it's going to have to take a back seat to actual school work. Sigh, real life's always getting in the way.

clayin September 22 2006, 17:54:22 UTC

*bounces enthusiastically* Loved it. Absolutely loved it. Especially the way you brought it full circle at the end.

I wanted to say that you did a good job dropping hints about Vision-Kang-Iron Lad. They were there to pick up on, but not huge and glaring and "LOOK! I AM A PLOT POINT! :D :D :D"

And Eli!snark is wonderful and fantastic.

licensedfanboy October 7 2006, 07:23:08 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you noticed the bookending scenes at the beginning and end.

I really appreciate the feedback and your enthusiasm, thank you so much.

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licensedfanboy October 7 2006, 07:23:36 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Hahahaha, yeahh, I rewatched Dwight's fake crying a few times. He's ridiculous.