Fic | GK | predators (the best are the ones who don't look like they're hunting), 3/3

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[noelia_g]

Holy fuck. I can't even. This has been, pretty much, hitting me right in the gut all the way. That hot/cold sinking feeling of reading something that hits just the right spot? This was that, all the way through.

Fuck, NATE, how so awesome? The fact that he's Nate and in control and unbelievably competent and just plain brilliant in such a strange and new world? Fantastic.

And gods, I find Nate orgasming over coffee about as hot as Brad does.

(Am I to take the ending as a hint that there will be more? I don't have any firstborns to offer and I don't plan on having any, but I have some cookies I can try and bribe you with...)

[lickingbeads]

Hee. I'm so very happy you enjoyed! Thank you!

I'm so biased when it comes to Nate, it's not even funny anymore. ♥

Am I to take the ending as a hint that there will be more?
Honestly? I'm not sure. The story goes on, obviously, but I'm not sure whether I'll be writing any more of it.

[skyearth85]

WoW!

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Ty :)

[laura_iskra]

not read yet, but squeeing at the mere thought of several thousands words of your vampire!AU :p

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Hahaha, aww. Hope I didn't disappoint X)

[laura_iskra]

well, the words that kept coming to mind while reading were "wow, so awesome" over and over again, so no disappointed at all I would say!

so much love for your ray, for the brad_and_ray phone conversation and for all the nate and ray interactions, their flirting/banter is to die for!

and I loved the hotness and urgency of bradandnate, their connection, the way nate is so in control even among a bunch of badasses vampires (lol at the baby vamps competing for bringing him coffee :p)...

so so happy to have more of this AU!

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♥ Glad to hear it, bb.

[silviakundera]

This was really neat. I adored your Ray!

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Thank you so much!

[dine]

oh, damn - why didn't I know that what my life sorely lacked was a kickass vampire AU? thankfully you stepped up to fill that gap!

I'm so glad you continued this - fantastic Ray voice, and I loved Brad turning his world upside down for Nate from the beginning; and of course, once Nate 'met' Brad, he refuses to sit back and let Brad run things.

I enjoyed every moment of this, and will likely come back to reread soon

and if there's ever more, I shall be an eternally thrilled dine

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Thank you so much for such a sweet comment, I'm really happy you enjoyed :)