Fic | GK | you are the risk (i'll always take)

Oct 04, 2010 22:01

Generation Kill | Brad/Nate | PG13

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writing, gk

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mcl4r3n October 4 2010, 22:34:56 UTC
Gaaaaahhhhh!! This is beautiful and making me incoherent. I love, love the double vision moments.

♥ ♥ ♥

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lickingbeads October 5 2010, 14:39:14 UTC
Thank you so much! ♥

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kubis October 4 2010, 22:44:51 UTC
I really liked this! :) Small details and moments coming together into the story.

Brad shakes his head to dispel the picture, but he's not fast enough to miss someone coming to stand next to Nate, palm dropping to rest on the back of his neck.

He got the scar on the back of his left wrist back in military school. It's faded, white, almost unnoticeable.
This was my favourite moment. ♥

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lickingbeads October 5 2010, 14:39:48 UTC
Glad it worked for you :) Thank you! &hearts

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busarewski October 4 2010, 23:13:09 UTC
utterly gorgeous!!

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lickingbeads October 5 2010, 14:40:04 UTC
Hee, thanks!

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lickingbeads October 5 2010, 14:43:49 UTC
I'm a firm believer in the fact that Brad and Nate aren't fooling anyone, haha.

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alasse October 5 2010, 00:35:50 UTC
This is gorgeous. Just, god. I looooooooooooooooooooooove the style of it, the way you nail Brad's POV and make this so full of longing and control and admiration. It's just quiet and perfect and AMAZING.

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lickingbeads October 5 2010, 14:45:48 UTC
Aw, I'm so very pleased to hear you enjoyed the style, since I wanted to try something slightly different for this. Thank you so much ♥

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