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Jan 20, 2011 15:57

Generation Kill | Brad/Nate, Ray/Nate | PG15

The research is obviously fucking with my brain bigtime, because this too is just... weird & uncalled-for. And also another one of those 'proceed at your own risk' things.

( Zero-three-hundred, 1130 words )

playtime, writing, gk

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i wasn't going to write anything BUT... noelia_g January 20 2011, 18:07:33 UTC

It’s more than thirty seconds ( ... )

I CLEARLY can't help myself. Brad can relate. noelia_g January 20 2011, 18:07:54 UTC

(He’d touch himself. When he gets on his knees for Nate, when he’s swallowing Nate’s cock, he’ll touch himself, stroke himself slowly only to tug hard every time he made Nate moan ( ... )

Re: I CLEARLY can't help myself. Brad can relate. lickingbeads January 20 2011, 18:19:58 UTC

JESUS MOTHERFUCKING CHRIST, BB. YOU CAN NOT STOP THERE. OHH FUCKING HELL, THE HIGH-PICTHED NOISES I WAS MAKING WHILE READING, WHEN MY MOUTH WASN'T FROZEN SLACK-JAWED OPEN.

You--you--seriously, are you trying to kill me??

Re: I CLEARLY can't help myself. Brad can relate. noelia_g January 20 2011, 18:22:57 UTC

Yes, clearly, this is my new trial method of assassination :D.

I DON'T KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT AND I WANT TO.

lickingbeads January 20 2011, 18:53:49 UTC

(AW SHIT 'S THE BEST I COULD DO. D: DOES NOT DO JUSTICE TO YOUR PIECE, BUT THERE IT IS.)

In the end, what can he do? He knows he'd follow Nate down to the ninth circle of Hell, has known it since Pendleton, and by now it's like conditioning, like he's been programmed to respond to that voice and the commanding glint in Nate's eyes.

And thoughts like this aren't helping.

Nate pauses a few steps from the Humvee, half turning back, surprised. "Brad?"

"Sir." Brad scrambles out of the car, with rather less grace than he usually moves. He sees Nate's eyebrow shoot up.

"Something wrong?"

Brad clears his throat, takes the first unsteady step toward Nate. "No, sir."

Nate's look calls bullshit. He starts walking back. "How many hours have you slept in the last two days, Sergeant? If you-"

The voice cuts off suddenly. Fuck, Brad thinks, just-fuck. He's not sure what it is, enough ambient light or maybe Nate can actually see in the dark without NVGs, who the fuck knows ( ... )

noelia_g January 20 2011, 19:00:04 UTC

.....

OKAY.

GIVE ME A MOMENT.

kubis January 20 2011, 19:03:25 UTC

IF YOU NEED A MINUTE, WE WILL UNDERSTAND.

noelia_g January 20 2011, 19:04:27 UTC

WELL PLAYED.

kubis January 20 2011, 19:02:37 UTC

Well, I just wrote above that I don't particularly like them hooking up in Iraq and then I read this and. IT'S HOT. AND I CAN SEE THAT HAPPENING. It's not even hooking up, it's just. IT HAPPENED. BRAD IS MORTIFIED, BUT THEY WILL GET THROUGH THIS AND THEY WILL HOOK UP AFTER IRAQ. BECAUSE THEY ARE MEANT TO BE. YES.

YEAH OKAY. noelia_g January 20 2011, 19:21:34 UTC

“Well,” Nate says, his voice a little muffled by the sound of loud fucking ringing in Brad’s ears. He hesitates over the next words, hesitates for long enough that it becomes clear that there are no words for this.

And to think he gave Ray fucking Person the easy way out.

“I could take that minute now, Sir,” he says, willing his voice to sound level and calm and not at all like he just came in his pants right in front of his commanding officer.

Where the fuck is the enemy when you need them? Getting shot at, that’s what he needs right now.

“Take all the time you need, Brad,” Nate tells him, and he’s smiling, indulgent and amused, but there’s something ( ... )

Because apparently we can't stop... kubis January 20 2011, 19:46:37 UTC

From AIM:

Noelia
btw, and then Ray comes back and is like: what's up homes?

Noelia
and Brad's like: .......srsly

Kubis
"Let's never talk about it again."

Noelia
except some fifteen years later during Brad's stag night, before his marriage to Nate.

Noelia
and Ray's like: hey, homes, remember that one time you practically made me come in my pants while you were talking about sucking Nate's dick?

Kubis
"Well, Ray, I actually came in my pants then. In front of Nate and his dick."

Noelia
"........and where the fuck was I? Seriously, homes, not cool, hiding shit like that from your dear pal Ray Ray."

Kubis
"I will gladly hide Nate's dick, as well as mine, from you for the rest of our lives."

Noelia
"Let me guess, you're writing your own vows, aren't you."

Kubis
"...Maybe. But there will be no mention of dick in them, I can assure you. And definitely no mention of you, unless I decide to change the part about the sickness."

THE END (PROBABLY)

Re: Because apparently we can't stop... lickingbeads January 20 2011, 20:01:02 UTC

*howls with laughter* Oh jesus, girls, you're killing me. In the best possible way. Oh, fuuuuuck, this rocks.

Re: YEAH OKAY. lickingbeads January 20 2011, 19:59:28 UTC

AHAHAAHHA. OH GOD. I LAUGHED. I LAUGHED SO MUCH. BECAUSE THIS IS SO PRICELESS AND AWESOME AND PERFECT. AND HOT. JUST. NO WORDS IS RIGHT.

Re: YEAH OKAY. noelia_g January 20 2011, 20:10:06 UTC

And you know, I wasn't going to write anything today... IDEK, GUYS.

<3

Re: YEAH OKAY. idrilka January 20 2011, 22:29:15 UTC

Hearts in my eyes. Let me show you them. ♥___♥

Can I sum this up by quoting kubis? NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE <333333333333333

idrilka January 20 2011, 22:19:05 UTC

OKAY.

So, I'm pretty incoherent at the moment. Even more that I'd been before. But... OKAY.

Like kubis, I prefer if they don't hook up until after coming back stateside, since, well, for me there are numerous reasons not to do anything while still in theater, but this -- this is something that I can definitely see happening, because it's subtle and easy to brush off if needed, but the essence is still there. and they're both aware of it.

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