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Jan 20, 2011 15:57

Generation Kill | Brad/Nate, Ray/Nate | PG15

The research is obviously fucking with my brain bigtime, because this too is just... weird & uncalled-for. And also another one of those 'proceed at your own risk' things.

( Zero-three-hundred, 1130 words )

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i wasn't going to write anything BUT... noelia_g January 20 2011, 18:07:33 UTC

It’s more than thirty seconds ( ... )

Re: I CLEARLY can't help myself. Brad can relate. lickingbeads January 20 2011, 20:05:10 UTC

Nate’s probably done. Brad could take his place, the same secluded spot. Sand could still be warm
I like, totally can't get over this. So fucking brilliant. And hot. And just--a little bit heartbreaking.

Re: I CLEARLY can't help myself. Brad can relate. idrilka January 20 2011, 22:11:15 UTC

Wow, that was great. I really liked the way you painted the scene here, your imagery is beautiful. And I love how you focus more on the feeling and less on the physical aspect.

And this:
(Nate’s probably done. Brad could take his place, the same secluded spot. Sand could still be warm.)
This SLAYS. ME.

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