Fic | GK | essentialism

Feb 26, 2011 04:47

Generation Kill | Brad/Nate | PG13

Happy birthday, firstillusion! <3 )

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kubis February 26 2011, 07:02:14 UTC
That was a great way to start the day. :) Familiarity and hotness, and Nate and Ray talking about drinking games? Priceless.

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lickingbeads February 27 2011, 08:13:06 UTC
The first time Ray talks him into putting where his mouth is, Nate has just returned from a covertly shared shower with Brad (everyone is Recon here, so "covert" just means Nate and Brad are telling and the guys do them the courtesy of pretendending they don't know) and is still trying to recover from the way Brad blew him, putting into good use all of the four minutes of not needing to breathe: swallowing around Nate, tight and slow, and pumping his fingers in and out of Nate's ass, like all he meant to do was drive him out of his mind.

It worked. Nate's legs still feel shaky.

So he's not completely in control of all his thought processes when Ray nudges and winks at Walt, and together they procure a bottle of Tequila, and Ray says, "Time to prove you know the rules to I never, LT ( ... )

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kubis February 27 2011, 11:54:00 UTC
I have a break between classes and I went to the library to check my e-mail and there it was. YOU EVIL, EVIL WOMAN. THANK YOU.

You can write HOTNESS so easily and you can do it in one sentence, I'm in awe. NOT LIKE NATE WAS, BUT STILL.

PLEASE, TELL ME (FEEL FREE TO WRITE ME, TOO) THAT NATE DRUNK THEM UNDER THE TABLE AND THEN TALKED ABOUT SEX, BECAUSE THEY ALL KNEW NEITHER RAY OR WALT WOULD REMEMBER IT. RAY ALMOST CRIED HE WOULDN'T AND HE WANTED TO TAKE NOTES OR SOMETHING, BUT HIS FINGERS WEREN'T COOPERATING. THE ONES THAT WEREN'T ON WALT'S ASS AT THE TIME, THAT IS.

I'M IN A LIBRARY AND I'M WRITING IN CAPSLOCK. HAVE A NICE DAY.

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lickingbeads February 27 2011, 13:39:15 UTC
WALT DID ONE BETTER, HE ACTUALLY DID TAKE NOTES, BALANCING THE PAPER AND PEN ON HIS KNEE UNDER THE TABLE AND EVEN GOING SO FAR AS TO WRITE LEFT-HANDED SO NO ONE WOULD NOTICE ANYTHING, BUT THEN HE SORT OF FORGOT HE WAS SITTING AT THE SAME TABLE WITH THE FREAKING ICEMAN, SO ONE TIME HE WAS USING THE HEAD AND CAME BACK THE PIECE OF PAPER WAS JUST FUCKING GONE AND WALT KNEW EXACTLY HOW TO BLAME.

SO THEN HE STARTED WRITING ON HIS WRIST, AND AT POINT EVEN NATE NOTICED AND WAS LIKE, GUYS, NOT IMPRESSED.

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firstillusion February 26 2011, 19:45:51 UTC
This was lovely, I'm so happy you wrote this in honour of my birthday, it's a great gift. Thank you so much!

Nate looks right into his eyes, like he's hearing something in Brad's tone he's sure he kept out of it.
I love this. I love when you write them when they've been together for some time, that they know each other.

Also? The part at the beginning, where you mention what Brad suggested and the disappointment when Nate says no that he pushes aside. It's one of those subtle feelings and you always punch me in the gut because you manage to portray those more complex things so well. ♥

THANK YOU!

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lickingbeads February 27 2011, 08:15:22 UTC
Haha, I'm just sorry I didn't have time for anything longer, bb. Hope you had a good birthday! ^^

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bgaleb February 28 2011, 21:38:35 UTC

It's so good and sweet like always!

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lickingbeads March 3 2011, 17:23:30 UTC
Thanks, bb! And sorry for the late comment.

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