Part One

Apr 29, 2012 11:59


[ How I'm feeling|
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yaoi, reita, ruki, jrock, miyavi

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uruha1 April 29 2012, 17:21:05 UTC
Spot ... Will read soon ... *longingly waiting already*

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life_giver April 29 2012, 17:22:37 UTC
LOL spot goes to the lovely Uruha1 o____O <3

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uruha1 April 29 2012, 20:55:13 UTC
Poor reita ... At first i thought its just a diva like ruki bossing around but reita is so much offended and hurt already it gets cruel to read at the end ... Like an old couple tide together for years without any other option or opportunity to change ... How can he live and love like a slave without mentioning a tiny thing ... Or is it a certain kind of sado maso behaviour ... And ruki is so selfish never asking once for his likes or dislikes ... Nearly like a domina ... Or domino in this case ... Only a lil bit of satisfied sex doesnt mean love will be included around the corner at the next moment ... Or rather in form of another person meeting at an icecube machine ... thats more likely ( ... )

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life_giver April 30 2012, 16:13:13 UTC
It's actually very easy to live and love like a slave if you feel deeply for a person, but eventually it gets old and you have to wake up someday...if that other person doesn't wake up. Everyone has a reason for acting the way they do. Sometimes it's not a very good reason of course lol I think it's one of the saddest situations; when a person loves another person so completely but that other person doesn't love them in return, or doesn't give as much in return. That's a sort of pain that no one should feel.

*hugs you tightly* Your comments always mean so much to me hon <3 Thank you so much -______-

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ururuki69 April 29 2012, 17:32:41 UTC
Spot! So tempted to read right now but I have to go! Damn read later

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life_giver April 30 2012, 16:13:33 UTC
:D I hope you enjoy!

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ururuki69 May 1 2012, 03:13:02 UTC
Yes I always enjoy when you write. Hehe hmm interesting pairs here.i love reixru! Great job can't wait to the next chapter.

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beelzama April 29 2012, 19:06:29 UTC
IT'S A NEW ONE!~ YAAY~~!

I'm happy lol and I like this! Reita needs to stop doing what people think he should be doing and do what he wants! Don't be Ruki's submissive pet!

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life_giver April 30 2012, 16:14:21 UTC
I think I have too many new ones started T____T I need to finish something LOL

Reita's such a submissive sweetheart here. It's the soft ones that always get batted around >__>

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_yoki_ April 29 2012, 19:25:41 UTC
Ruki is a bastard. I like Miyavi in this, a lot. I've really liked your writing over the years, and I find I always come back to it, no matter what.

I'm excited to see where this goes, but I'm definitely not a fan of Ruki's character in this. XD He needs to be less of a bitch and a liiiiiittle bit nicer to Rei. Or he'll just lose him to Miyavi - which I think would be the better option all-around.

This makes me feel like writing again, too, and so I have to thank you for that. It's been a long time since I've written fic, and it bothers me. I miss it a lot, but classes haven't exactly afforded oodles of spare time to lend to writing.

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life_giver April 30 2012, 16:16:10 UTC
Ruki is definitely a bastard here taha Ah, that means a lot hon and I thank you for taking the time to stop by and read! :D

Well right now with the people reading seems like Ruki's on the losing side. Sorry Ru >__> You are not liked at the moment. Point to Miyavi.

Well why don't you start writing again hon?? Whenever you get any spare time, you should just write something, anything :]

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_yoki_ April 30 2012, 16:33:44 UTC
No, no. Thank you for writing so wonderfully. I know I'm always in for a good read when I sit down to something of yours. :3

Well, I shouldn't say I don't like Ruki in this, because he's very well written. I just think he's mean, and giving Rei the run-around and I don't appreciate that. XD Rei's too sweet to be treated so poorly.

I think I will. I have a bit of time still before my spring class starts. We'll see what I can get done. Having not written for so long, it feels like the muses have gotten rusty. I need to find my groove again, and the only way to do that of course is to get writing again. *le sigh* I'm going to be such a busy lady this summer~

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life_giver April 30 2012, 16:43:01 UTC
Gaaaaah. -_________- I wish I knew how to take compliments LOL But thank you hon.

Ruki here is a character many people have met already. lol He's the bitch that breaks your heart with no visible reason, or a reason he keeps to himself. We all know one of those taha I do feel bad writing Reita getting thrown around :/

DO IT. All work and no play is never a good thing :/ You have to take a break once in awhile to indulge in some writing. Do you have a writing journal here? You have me curious now :D

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katie_kat April 29 2012, 19:50:08 UTC
I love this, Your Ruki is prue win. I love when such a cute little thing can show domance and be submissive at the same time.
In other words it made my day.

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life_giver April 30 2012, 16:16:57 UTC
LOL Oh is this a point in Ruki's favor? I thought he was completely disliked here taha

I'm glad this could make your day hon ;D

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katie_kat April 30 2012, 21:50:02 UTC
Of course it is a point for him, Ruki needs some love too. He may be a devious little shit, however a beautifully written little shit. Which makes me want to kiss him till his lips bleed.

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life_giver May 3 2012, 21:48:30 UTC
Gah, his lips DO need to be kissed until they bleed. They are the most beautiful pair of lips (besides Uruha's) I've seen T_______T

Devious shit that he is. lol

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