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[life_giver]

[ How I'm feeling|

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[uruha1]

Omg ... I m still drenched in tears ... Aois longing for uru is beyond boundaries and i so perfectly know what he is going through ... All his tough time seeping through lingering memories like haunting in each corner and especially between the sheets till driving someone mad or even worse ... *still remember my tough time when even simply breathing was difficult through a curtain of tears which seem to suffocate me* ... And somehow till the last line wishing for a happy ending for both of them ... But of coz miracles are just as rare as diamonds in an ordinary sandpit ... So finally aoi faced reality but his memory will be logged in his chest and around his heart and when it will surface again in real or as ghost who knows

[life_giver]

*cuddles you* I love how you you grasped this so perfectly "So finally aoi faced reality but his memory will be logged in his chest and around his heart and when it will surface again in real or as ghost who knows ... " Exactly....you never know what the outcome of something will be, but sometimes you just can't hang on or it's going to suffocate you. It's better to let it go and move on and if something does come back to you.....the better for you, but you can't waste your life wallowing in it.

Oh I'm doing great these days, thank you bb. I just slip into moods where I want to write something that isn't happy LOL I want to write something real.

*hugs you back*

[laurizm]

I need to say.. melancholy is an understatement. I had to stop reading many times because I couldn't stop crying. Even now I can't. I'm glad nobody's home because I'm sobbing XDDD
This is beautiful, but it completely broke my heart.

[life_giver]

Aww I'm sorry bb *hugs you* -______-

[laurizm]

Don't be *hugs back* I cried a lot, but I also enjoyed it. You always chose the right words to touch my heart :) .

[jali_susundeiru]

That's pretty intense. I feel like if this was filmed, it would make an awesome indie film or music video or something. I didn't get lost with all the memoryness happening.

You do have a typo tho XD You wrote "dieing" -> "dying".

[life_giver]

Awww thank you bb. I feel like going to watch some sad indie films now LOL

Sheeeet. Though I didn't proofread this as much as should. I'm gonna get to it soon taha Thank you for pointing that out :oooo