Comments | life_giver: Part One

life_giver

Part One

Mar 14, 2013 08:08

[ How I'm feeling|

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kazuki, aoi, yaoi, gazette, screw, uruha

Comments 23

velvet_liquor March 14 2013, 14:31:59 UTC

I think my mind just died from happiness the second I saw the email in my inbox, the one saying you had posted. I experienced a second death when I saw the post was tagged with "kazuki, aoi, uruha". but really, I just kept making weir cheering, semi orgasm-sounding noisesI almost wanted to wait to read this (since I was in the middle of making a fan video, and Ruki's pretty face is rather distracting), but I just couldn't, I had to read this ( ... )

life_giver March 21 2013, 00:46:47 UTC

I think my mind just died from your comment LOL I had a mindgasm ( ... )

shimasparrow March 15 2013, 00:06:13 UTC

This was great. I enjoyed reading this. I cant hate on Aoi,just trying to push away someone he knows he probably don't disurve... well weither or not, i still think Aoi and Uruha would make a good couple to put in a fan fiction.
Anyway,this was a very enjoyable fanfic,cant wait to read more.

life_giver March 21 2013, 00:47:57 UTC

Thank you hon!! Aoiha will always be my otp, but I have to throw someone else in the mix from time to time. I'm glad Aoi isn't completely hated here.

More will come soon!

nori_chan412 March 15 2013, 00:59:22 UTC

OMYGAWD OMYGAWD OMYGAWD OMYGAWD :::: giggles like a madwoman::: I'm so hype right now it's insane. I trust your creative judgment 100% so I'm sure however you chose to use the concept is brilliant. Now I will go run and read and then come back and praise you until your sick of it ^_~

nori_chan412 March 15 2013, 01:52:46 UTC

This had my heart throbbing and my stomach in knots for what Aoi was feeling and How Uruha was reacting to the whole situation. You began the whole thing beautifully. I think throwing us into the chaos, the whole meat of the matter was a great way to do it. The way Kazuki is in here works nicely, he doesn't overshadow Aoi and Uruha but he is still a major player in the plot. BRILLIANTLY DONE my love. I can't wait to see where you take it ^_~ <3 <3 <3

P.S Even though I knew it was coming, the fact that Aoi betrayed Uruha does not lesson my love for him in this story at all. Who knows what we would have done in his shoes.

life_giver March 21 2013, 00:50:01 UTC

Yaaaay, I was sweating over whether you would like this or not, because I wasn't sure if you'd like the direction I was going in. It makes me so happy that you approve though lol Yeah in the beginning I wanted to keep Kazuki a bit shadowed, and then bring him out bit by bit.

Thank youuu *tackles you*

Also, I was hoping you wouldn't be too harsh on Aoi.....I know he's a bastard, but I think everyone is in here taha And they all have their reasons for acting the way they do.

<3!!!!!

nori_chan412 March 21 2013, 02:54:39 UTC

Oh i can wait ^________^ <---- big evil grin

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life_giver March 21 2013, 00:54:28 UTC

Very twisted eh? Uru's about as messed up as Aoi is in this thing. People do stray from the people they love for whatever reasons. Here, Aoi was feeling rejected, Kazuki basically threw himself at Aoi, things happened, people were hurt. *sigh* They all have their reasons for doing what they did. Not very good reasons, but that's life.

Kyaha, glad you liked despite all the angst. And you're right, I have a bit more in store for later on taha~~~