I don't understand how you do it, I mean, keeping us on the brink of frustration, about to tear my hair out from the rights, like, " OMG, WHY, WHYYYY, NOOOO T___T" I really like how you've paid so much attention to their actual characters and used them here... of course, Kazuki and Uruha are not that bitchy... lol... but it just seems so real!!! The emotions, the actions, the dialogues... really awesome! I read your fics avidly, and I was waiting for you to finish this... so I read it all together today XD The ending ... I seriously wantwd to cry... but I'll be an optimist and read it again with a picture of Uruha still there the next morning.. XD Really, well done as always ^__^
I just write exactly what I want to read and I love drama and cliff-hangers and all those sorts of evil things LOL
I do that a lot. I like study people and capture their personalities. I really took some liberties here though taha Kazuki from what I've seen is a total sweetheart in real life, and in this fic, he's a sweetheart, but he's also cunning and just a bit wicked. Uruha doesn't come off as bitchy to me in real life at all, just very blunt and "I don't give a fuck. I do what I want, however slowly I want to do it." taha Or something along those lines. I'm glad you enjoyed though, really :D
Personally, I sort of picture Uruha giving Aoi another chance if that makes you feel any better. I think it would suit the pattern he held throughout the whole story; unrelenting and willing to make things work no matter how shitty they got. Stupid, hopeful, stubborn, and beautifully passionate and in love/obsession LOL I don't think there's anything wrong with that :)
Omg... Thank you for the last bit! It does make me feel better.. and you are right about Uruha's personality in real life. That is what makes him so unique... And Kazuki is just cute... Reallyyyy very cute... And an Aoi fanboy XD
I'm really glad this was appreciated, and that you enjoyed the ending. I felt that was just the way it needed to end itself. It isn't definite, but then nothing in the story ever was.
*hugs you* Thank you for taking the time to read and leave such a great comment. You're lovely, truly.
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I really like how you've paid so much attention to their actual characters and used them here... of course, Kazuki and Uruha are not that bitchy... lol... but it just seems so real!!! The emotions, the actions, the dialogues... really awesome!
I read your fics avidly, and I was waiting for you to finish this... so I read it all together today XD
The ending ... I seriously wantwd to cry... but I'll be an optimist and read it again with a picture of Uruha still there the next morning..
XD
Really, well done as always ^__^
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I do that a lot. I like study people and capture their personalities. I really took some liberties here though taha Kazuki from what I've seen is a total sweetheart in real life, and in this fic, he's a sweetheart, but he's also cunning and just a bit wicked. Uruha doesn't come off as bitchy to me in real life at all, just very blunt and "I don't give a fuck. I do what I want, however slowly I want to do it." taha Or something along those lines. I'm glad you enjoyed though, really :D
Personally, I sort of picture Uruha giving Aoi another chance if that makes you feel any better. I think it would suit the pattern he held throughout the whole story; unrelenting and willing to make things work no matter how shitty they got. Stupid, hopeful, stubborn, and beautifully passionate and in love/obsession LOL I don't think there's anything wrong with that :)
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I'm really glad this was appreciated, and that you enjoyed the ending. I felt that was just the way it needed to end itself. It isn't definite, but then nothing in the story ever was.
*hugs you* Thank you for taking the time to read and leave such a great comment. You're lovely, truly.
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