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Jan 18, 2006 20:27

STORY TIME!!!!!!!!

I'm going to tell you the story that I wrote for science class today. The assignment was to write a scary story that involved electricity. so...

On Chocolate, Chapstick and Plugs )

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Perfect onelightperhaps January 19 2006, 01:39:21 UTC
It's perfect just like you.
~peace & love~

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Re: Perfect life_question January 19 2006, 01:42:18 UTC
It's far from perfect, and so am I.

so...do you think I'll make an A or a B?

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Re: Perfect jeweleddragon January 19 2006, 01:51:05 UTC
*pops head into your conversation*

I bet you'd make an A. Except you've kinda got some non-school-appropriate references in there.

Also, you could say that everything/anything is perfect, or that nothing is perfect, or that only God is perfect, or whatever you want, really. It depends upon your definition. I strongly suspect the the idea of "perfection" is relative (a lot would say that's common sense, but in the world of speculation, maybe there is a definitive "perfect". Or maybe everyone imagines the same "perfect" but uses different words to describe it.) Can perfection, even relative perfection, be imagined anyways? All I can say is that I probably couldn't imagine one of my own ideas of "perfection" for something ("something" since you can have different ideas of perfection for different things, or different ideas of perfection for the same thing.)

*ramble ramble ramble*

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Re: Perfect life_question January 19 2006, 01:53:44 UTC
I wasn't thinking about putting anything un-school appropriate in there, your mind just warped it that way.

and I'm inclined to agree with you in matters of perfection...

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aurelias_roses January 19 2006, 01:41:21 UTC
Heh...me likes. Er. I really want to properly critique, but...I can't think of anything to say. Er. I got a horrible feeling that this is an allegory to, say, TIP, but that's just silly. Right? RIGHT?!

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life_question January 19 2006, 01:43:12 UTC
it's more of an allegory to my life in general...

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jeweleddragon January 19 2006, 01:46:19 UTC
Elaborate?

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life_question January 19 2006, 01:50:13 UTC
well, mostly TIP and my life as it stands now, because those are the things that are most influencing on me at the moment...

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jeweleddragon January 19 2006, 01:41:53 UTC
Poifection!

Just some minor typos.

Anyways, it's deliciously random. I want to eat it. Like those chocolates.

*squeals*

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life_question January 19 2006, 01:44:12 UTC
thank you, thank you... *bows*

of course there are typos...I have been possessed by the demon of typos and inability to spell.

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jeweleddragon January 19 2006, 01:45:41 UTC
Also, did you mean "outlets" when you said "plugs"? Beause "plugs" are the things that get plugged into outlets. And outlets are the things that get plugs plugged into.

Unless you randomly switched definitions. But if you did, other readers wouldn't get the randomness.

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life_question January 19 2006, 01:49:04 UTC
yes, I switched the meanings, just to confuse people...

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god_of_add January 19 2006, 02:05:39 UTC
It's pretty awesome. I can actually feel the little chocolate's anxiety and fright. Congratulations on a story well written. Oh, and I applaud your randomness. EMBRACE THE FEATHER!!

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life_question January 19 2006, 02:10:25 UTC
*embraces feather*

why thank you.

you guys make my little story feel ever so loved.

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