fic: deus ex machina

Apr 13, 2011 22:07

Title: Deus Ex Machina [god in the machine]
Chapter: Six
Author: lifeawakening  
Words: 7,483
Rating: R (For future scary images, language, and sexual references)
Summary: Rachel Berry always knew that she was a little bit psychic. In fact, Rachel Berry thought she knew just about everything. That is, until a spirit that refused to die entered her life like a train- ( Read more... )

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matrevir April 15 2011, 01:25:45 UTC
Great chapter. Yay kiss!! Can't wait for more.

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lifeawakening April 16 2011, 18:56:48 UTC
Thank you so much for reading!

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lifeawakening April 16 2011, 19:13:23 UTC
Well thank you for getting back to it and reading! I'm so glad you liked it, and I hope you like the next chapter as well :)

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lifeawakening April 16 2011, 18:57:24 UTC
AHHHHHHHHH OKAY!

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dreamupfalldown April 15 2011, 21:19:39 UTC
If I wasn't completely in love with your story before, I definitely am now. The kissing scene between Rachel and Quinn had to be the most stunning scene ever composed. It was loving and tragic, what will happen to their odd romance now?
I'm adoring the fact that Quinn is now phasing in and out of being tangible, it just yanks on my heartstrings whenever she goes back to full-on ghost though. :C (can't say I don't love it)
Well I'm looking forward to the next installment! I mean Rachel looks like she's about to get into a really messy situation with the Ombras. It's gonna be good. C:

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lifeawakening April 16 2011, 19:03:34 UTC
Ugh telling me that was a stunning scene was SUCH an amazing compliment for me, thank you so much. It yanks at my heart too to write Quinn going back to full-on ghost lol so I understand. Thank you so much for reading, and I hope that the next chapter does not disappoint!

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You're back!! sneaky_gays April 15 2011, 21:54:12 UTC
If I had only 3 words to describe this chapter, I'd say... 'worth the wait' Oh screw it, 4 words... 'definitely worth the wait ( ... )

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Re: You're back!! lifeawakening April 16 2011, 19:10:29 UTC
The way you describe them as two lost souls who found one another (and not on accident) is exactly what I'm going for, because that's what happened :) I'm with you on the soul thing, by the way, and I will eventually be addressing that in the story itself.

I'm so glad that you enjoyed the kiss! I love how you said Quinn feels more 'alive' now, because I agree! Pft, the impossible is always possible. It's 100% safe to assume you will be back to review another chapter in two weeks, and I look forward to seeing you! Thank you so much for reading :)

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aberration_28 April 16 2011, 00:10:19 UTC
Read this twice already. I love this story sfm! The kiss :D
More please soon!

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lifeawakening April 16 2011, 19:06:14 UTC
Thank you so much for reading it (twice)!

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