Title: You better get here soon, please don't make too much of it. [I won't get out alive, take it easy on me] Chapter: Eight/Ten Author:
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Noooo you can't leave it there!!It's just cruel!! Great chapter, glad Jessie is out ot the way, at least for now. Let's hope now we won't step into a Finn 2.0 the revenge of the dumb.
wow this is the first fic that i'm commenting on, after reading so many (:
I really love this fic, and how you've written it (: It's so in character! How Quinn was such a bitch, and in denial of how much she cared about Rachel, how Rachel felt so lonely. And the progression of their relationship is just perfect, there's no 180 degree turn of their emotions, no suddenly jumping into being friends. It's realistic, and that's what makes it so good and compelling (:
And I love how everything is in the subtleties. This line is the best example Might as well give up trying to explain myself when it comes to Rachel, Quinn thought helplessly. I didn't even realize how helpless Quinn is around Rachel until she says this, because it's just so seamless, and then with suddenly it just hit me. And how well-thought out Rachel's backstory was. Everything is all seamlessly put together, and it's a joy to read :D
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Wow, first, can I say that I'm honored to have my fic be the first fic you comment on? Because I am. So thank you so much! And second, don't be sorry for long comments, they're like oxygen for me! God, I don't even know where to like, start in thanking you lol. You pretty much pegged everything I was hoping to achieve in writing this story, so thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I really hope you enjoy the last two chapters :)
Mmmmm and now what Finn wants? he better stays out of this if he doesn't want Santana (and Quinn) kicking his ass. Again. Though I can't wait to see what is going to happen next, especially what Quinn is going to say. Great chapter :)
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Great chapter, glad Jessie is out ot the way, at least for now.
Let's hope now we won't step into a Finn 2.0 the revenge of the dumb.
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Nice :)
But Finn needs to GTFO. Or Mike and Puck need to tackle him.
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They're are,after all football players :D
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I really love this fic, and how you've written it (: It's so in character! How Quinn was such a bitch, and in denial of how much she cared about Rachel, how Rachel felt so lonely. And the progression of their relationship is just perfect, there's no 180 degree turn of their emotions, no suddenly jumping into being friends. It's realistic, and that's what makes it so good and compelling (:
And I love how everything is in the subtleties. This line is the best example Might as well give up trying to explain myself when it comes to Rachel, Quinn thought helplessly. I didn't even realize how helpless Quinn is around Rachel until she says this, because it's just so seamless, and then with suddenly it just hit me. And how well-thought out Rachel's backstory was. Everything is all seamlessly put together, and it's a joy to read :D ( ... )
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Great chapter :)
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