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lifeawakening

fic

Jan 06, 2011 20:28

Title: Deus Ex Machina [god in the machine]
Chapter: One
Author: lifeawakening
Words: 7,529
Rating: R (For future scary images, language, and sexual references)
Summary: Rachel Berry always knew that she was a little bit psychic. In fact, Rachel Berry thought she knew just about everything. That is, until a spirit that refused to die entered her life like a train- ( Read more... )

Comments 36

xrainingsorrowx January 7 2011, 14:43:57 UTC

I kind of love this :)

lifeawakening January 8 2011, 09:49:42 UTC

I'm VERY glad! Thank you for reading!

a_fallenknight January 7 2011, 15:34:56 UTC

Okay...so I may be kind of falling in love with this fic. Just one chapter and I'm on the edge waiting for more already!
I do hope you continue this, it's an interesting plot line!

lifeawakening January 8 2011, 09:50:59 UTC

Thank you for reading! I will DEFINITELY be continuing it, no worries there :)

silentinformer January 7 2011, 15:45:55 UTC

ok for some reason I thought this was a one-shot so I was on edge for the conclusion and then I got to the end and was like way to go genius lol. This is very intriguing and I can't help but feel that Rachel's connection to Quinn is she is the person Rachel saw die when she was younger and thus sparked their connection. Can't wait for more.

lifeawakening January 8 2011, 09:51:59 UTC

Oh! That's brutal though, because you definitely have to wait a lot longer for the conclusion lol. Well, we shall see if you're right :) Thank you for reading!

hostile_666 January 7 2011, 16:09:07 UTC

I'm a bit in love with this. It's so awsome.
I loved that Sue wasn't mean when Quinn was a cheerleader and now she is, that amuses me somehow, it'd be cute if she was all mean 'cause she was attached to Quinn in some way and when she died she didn't wanna be attached and now she's evil to the Cheerio's xD
I love Rachel's connection to Quinn and how calm she is about it haha, it's very cool.

lifeawakening January 8 2011, 09:53:01 UTC

Thank you so much for reading! You're thinking ahead, that's for sure :)

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Re: !! lifeawakening January 8 2011, 09:54:04 UTC

Thank you! You caught that little Quinn detail, I love it. Don't worry, the Finchel is just as hard for me to write as it is for you to read! Thanks for still sticking around though and reading :)