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fic: deus ex machina

Feb 03, 2011 21:02

Title: Deus Ex Machina [god in the machine]
Chapter: Three
Author: lifeawakening
Words: 7,280
Rating: R (For future scary images, language, and sexual references)
Summary: Rachel Berry always knew that she was a little bit psychic. In fact, Rachel Berry thought she knew just about everything. That is, until a spirit that refused to die entered her life like a train ( Read more... )

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Comments 33

mjacton February 4 2011, 18:54:32 UTC

So, Finn's done with. And Rachel is visiting Quinn regularly. And the rest of the glee clubbers still want nothing to do with Rachel.

That's kind of bittersweet, as far as Rachel is concerned. I hope Quinn can at least become more real to her at some point, like maybe be able to see her. I really don't know how the ghost thing is supposed to work so I'm assuming anything can happen.

lifeawakening February 6 2011, 01:47:30 UTC

Incredibly bittersweet at the moment, but we'll see what happens :) Anything can happen, for the most part lol. Thank you so much for reading <3

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lifeawakening February 6 2011, 01:47:53 UTC

I think so, too! Thank you so much!

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Re: !! lifeawakening February 6 2011, 01:54:52 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

aberration_28 February 4 2011, 23:18:39 UTC

As others have said, the Quinn and Rachel are spot on character wise. Really enjoying your style and I'm eager to find out how/why/when the connection started!! More soon please.

lifeawakening February 6 2011, 02:22:15 UTC

Oh thank you so much for reading! I hope you aren't disappointed by your answers to those questions :)

dreamupfalldown February 5 2011, 01:34:06 UTC

Score! Progress!
I gotta admit this chapter had me for a whirl when it started from Quinn's PoV I was so confused for a moment (I get it now, haha. I was just used to Rachel). It's nice that Quinn's family still keeps a house in Lima for her to haunt, as sad as that is.
Now I would like to take the time to praise Quinn for her ghost powers are awesome! I mean it sucks being dead but at least she can still do normal things like watch television and eat, although I'm not sure how healthy that is in terms of moving on but clearly we don't need to worry about that. Lucky us. Instead we get to deal with the Ombras and Rachel's questionable memories and sanity. Woo~
I really love this story so the update just made my WEEK. :D
Thank you soo much!

lifeawakening February 6 2011, 02:23:29 UTC

It is sad, but at least Quinn has somewhere to go! Oh, you have NO idea how awesome her powers are going to get, you'll love it. Thank you SO much for reading :D