fic: edge of desire (michael johns/david cook) (2/2)

[lifescript]

Title: Edge of Desire
Pairing: David Cook/Michael Johns
Rating: PG-13
Summary: David Cook sort of falls in and out of love with Michael Johns, and all of the stops in between. 17k.

Comments

[voldemort]

You are my favorite.

best line in the whole story:

(He used to like it. He used to think it was funny. He and Michael used to talk about themselves in third person like they were one unit: “Mavid’s hungry,” Michael would whine before dinner; “Mavid wants to go to bed,” Dave would intone after a long day of rehearsals.)

I LAUGHED SO HARD. my brain mavid would so do that. :)

<333

[novelized]

<333 ily

[chemicalwonder]

I was afraid this would end badly but I'm glad we got happy Mavid in the end!

[novelized]

always happy mavid. it just took ten years to get there, ha

[circlesanthem]

;mjfpfjsopj i mean you know. MOAR

[novelized]

GREEDY.

[circlesanthem]

okay no moar mavid... moar dekelly

[lifescript]

there can't be MOAR because i have never (will never) written any

[emo_bangs]

He lost that privilege.
^Awww

“She’s cute,” Brooke says pointedly.

“She is,” David agrees. “You should go for it.”
^LOL!

“I’m not really into reality show contestants.”
^this line made me want to laugh but then I was kinda like :( MIKEY!

He doesn’t get one. Life goes on.
^awww...this is so bittersweet

he splurges on a new vest-and-tie combo that his mom thinks he looks adorable in
^Lol! I love lines about dave's mom

(He used to like it. He used to think it was funny. He and Michael used to talk about themselves in third person like they were one unit: “Mavid’s hungry,” Michael would whine before dinner; “Mavid wants to go to bed,” Dave would intone after a long day of rehearsals.)
^ LOL! and awwww...

David’s heart maybe does that stupid thing where it skips a beat.
^Awwwww...Dave is so in love!

Well, not just the robot-“tons of dances, any sort of them, really”-but they start with the robot, right at the tail end of the concert, just as Please Don’t Stop the Music is wrapping up
^Ahhh, the mavid dance <33333

[novelized]

omg i love your comments. thank you so much <333

[iconlove90]

I've missed these two so much. This was great, and written perfectly in character. Really, well done! :)

[novelized]

hee thank you!