Act of Play - Leave Me at The Roadside 2/2

[lifesscar]

Series: Act of Play
Title: Leave Me at the Roadside?
Chapter: 2 Of 2
Word Count: 2943
Rating: R
Disclaimer: The title is being politely borrowed from Rise Against. This is, obviously, fake and did not happen. I am merely borrowing the names and faces of real life people and none of this is meant in any way to harm their reputation. This is a

Comments

[z3s_keep_going]

wow love this. can't wait for more. i love how real it sounds ;D

[lifesscar]

Thank you!

I hope to get the first part of the next session out before christmas but... no promises.

Thank you very much =D

oooh creepy good

[anonymous]

wow that was cruel. But i get he was angry, jensen himself admited he would be, but goodness the kid was nasty. guess its his way to deal.
So group couselling in order huh?
Great stuff, well done!!

Re: oooh creepy good

[lifesscar]

Thank you!

Yes it was cruel! He was a very spiteful kid... but previously I had been debating on whether he would be Angry or withdrawn.

I never planned on having Jake give Jensen such a tongue lashing!

Lmao, yeah seems like ti doesn't it?

Thank you very much!

[kuhekabir]

Wow, that was intense. And I can't believe you left it like that. Please post more soon :)

[lifesscar]

Thank you! Aww, I'm sorry, I left it there because I felt that it would take away from the whole scene to go into it any farther. It's also a big reason why this part is just one scene, not broken up like the others.

Thank you, again! I hope to get more out soon. Believe it or not I started working on the next part as soon as I finished writing this one.

[bezziewez]

Wow, I read this earlier, went away, and couldn't stop thinking about it. I had to come back and read it again, it's really powerful! Everything seems so screwed up, and everyone is hurting so much. I just can't wait to see where everyone goes from here.

[lifesscar]

Wow! Thank you! You have no idea how happy it makes me to know that I had someone have to read it again.

Yeah, there's a lot going on with everyone. I'm hoping to get into Jared's problems soon!

Man, I could go on and on and I wish I could without giving everything away.

Thank you so much!

[x_tired_crazy_x]

Umm. This story is pretty fucking amazing. Like... all emotion and shit and well..\

i love it.

UPDATE SOON!

[lifesscar]

Thank you!

I'm glad you love it and I love getting reviews from you!

I'm hoping for another update before Christmas but... no promises.

Thank you so much, again!