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[ascadulineadept]

Title: Properly
Pairing: Simon/River
Rating: PG-13
Summary: River wants to know things Simon would rather not have to explain.
Warnings: Incest-based
Disclaimer: Joss Whedon made these characters, and I did not.  I am not writing this for profit.

Comments appreciated!

"What is, 'properly'?" River asked.  "The word has no application here.  'Properly' is

Comments

[sandoz_iscariot]

Very sweet. Both characters felt just right; I could easily imagine this as maybe an extension of their "in the family way" conversation.

[lethal_paine]

Awsome! You do have their voices well! I'm so glad someone else posted a fic for once, it seems like there hasn't been one in forever.

[akito_darkangel]

Very cool. Well-written, and unique. I liked the dialogue format.

[sillysillykira]

I love how River completely destroy's Simon's argument with her River-logic.