fic: Leaking

[ascadulineadept]

Title: Leaking
Pairing: River/Simon
Rating: PG
Disclaimers: Don't own the characters, Joss does

Written for the May

Comments

[aoife_hime]

I told you this before, but...

*SQUEE*

I can't get enough of the imagery of thoughts as physical objects. It's making my imagination run around in crazy circles, trying to run with the idea somehow.

[ascadulineadept]

*counter-SQUEE*

[sandoz_iscariot]

Wow, wonderful imagery. I really liked this.

[ascadulineadept]

Thank you!

(Also, your icon makes me laugh every time ^^)

[antistar_e]

Amazing imagery. Very deep, very insightful, chillingly so sometimes. This was a joy to read!

[ascadulineadept]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked.

(I'm also blushing ^^)

(Also, your icon is wonderful!)

[ascadulineadept]

Thank you! I'm glad you like them. Or, at least, the metaphors ^^

Mmm ... candy wrapped in bright shiny cellophane ...

[akito_darkangel]

This is beautiful, not just because of the poetic flow of each verse but also because of your use of subtlety. Simon's romantic inclinations toward River are only alluded to, and that makes them all the more intriguing.

[ascadulineadept]

Thank you! I hoped that I managed to capture the not-quite-ness of them ^^

(Also, glad you like the other one - dialogue for them is hard!)