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harujongin December 15 2014, 09:34:58 UTC
i just read it this morning while in bed although i should have gotten up to do stuff
and i promised myself only to read the first half but i couldn't stop myself ;u;

i loved the whole plot and reading the desc i thought the puppy would be sehun at first lmao
it was a whole lot more angsty than the fluff i expected but i still loved it.
you got me crying when sehun was watching kai's latest youtube video ;A;

jongin's so whipped though by both sehun and monggu xD

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lightbrakes December 16 2014, 12:40:30 UTC
omg I hope you weren't late for anything! This is around finals week, isn't it?

lmao I'm terrible at writing magical stuff so nope, no transformations for this fic lol. I'm like 100000% angst writer whispers tbh I wanted to make it angstier orz but I'm glad you still liked it!
and omg I hope the Sehun watching Jongin's video part wasn't too cheesy for you. I was like what is this nauseating fluff??? when I wrote that part orz x__x

lbr Sehun (+ Monggu) has Jongin wrapped around their little finger/paw lol.

thank you for reading! ♥

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harujongin December 16 2014, 19:47:42 UTC
no i don't have finals until february, just some readings for regular classes orz

i think it's not too difficult to write magical stuff? depends on what kind of world it is. it could still be this universe with a spark of magic, i think if you're a realistic writer, you could try that? it doesn't have to be a whole fantasy world. i'm sure you can pull that off too^^
also i think even angsty writers have moments they can't produce anything but fluff, too, and it's okay xD
(i feel you bc i usually write more angsty stories, but then there are times i write fluff instead and every time i read those i cringe ;u;)

but i don't think it was too cheesy? it fits their relationship. the length was perfect, like jongin could have said a lot more, and he didn't. it was the right amount of cheesiness ~

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lightbrakes December 17 2014, 01:10:22 UTC
no finals till feb.? that's so lucky! my finals were last week and I was dying orz.

I think I'm just not very creative? a magical world requires more imagination to think of than the world we know of and are living in. that's why I tend to write modern!aus more. I do see a lot of wolf!aus in the exo fandom though (thanks to exo legit howling as part of their song smh), but I haven't dabbled in it myself... have you? :o

yes! like when you're so used to writing angst and try fluff you're like, what is this?? it's so cheesy and sweet i'm getting cavities, etc. etc. lol. you always end up wondering if this is too much fluff, whereas with angst i'm just like, yesss let all the sadness and the tears come!! lol. (i'm a masochist can you tell orz.)

the thing I like about Sekai is they can fit just about any au/scenario, really. they're so perfect sobs ;; /biased

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illusiontooreal December 15 2014, 12:19:20 UTC
This i

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illusiontooreal December 15 2014, 12:20:20 UTC
What the Frick my phone just went cray on me. Anyways, this was aDORABLE AND JSKDNWHEINSBSHS. Ahhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhahahahahahahahha /kisses

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lightbrakes December 16 2014, 12:41:01 UTC
ahhh I'm glad you liked it! /blows kisses back. thank you for reading! ♥

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xxhna December 15 2014, 13:10:11 UTC
This is your first Sekai fic?! DAMN. Good job Omgosh. I LOVE IT.

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lightbrakes December 16 2014, 12:42:44 UTC
haha yeah I was like, "13k for your first Sekai fic?? self, whyyy" lol but I'm glad you liked it! thank you for reading! ♥

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supremekoi December 16 2014, 13:28:29 UTC
this is so perfect?????? you got the characterisations just right! sehun and jongin are too much...two massive dorky cuties plus a cute puppy, i'm so weak for this. this is such a sweet story OTL thank you for writing, i hope you write more sekai! x

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lightbrakes December 17 2014, 00:34:16 UTC
ah I'm glad to hear that! Sehun and Jongin are basically just dumb kids who got together thanks to their very smart puppy! haha.
I've written more Sekai but they're all ongoing chaptered fics (bc how to write short oneshots??) so I'm waiting till I've finished them to properly post them here. thank you for reading! ♥

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gazys December 28 2014, 22:34:34 UTC
Loved it. Thanks for writing ♡♥

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lightbrakes January 2 2015, 11:19:03 UTC
thank you for reading! ♥

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