SUPER JUNIOR FIC: As the crow flies Chapter nine/nine [R, various pairings]

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Title: As the crow flies chapter nine
Author: Selena
Rating: R
Pairing: Kangin/Leeteuk [main], Heechul/Han Geng [main], Eunhyuk/Donghae, Siwon/Sungmin, Kyuhyun/Zhou Mi, Yesung/Ryeowook.
Warnings: Angst, drama, sex, violence, character death
Word count: This Chapter = 5, 032
Summary: Immortals, they fight for the right and the power to rule the

Comments

[astormisbrewing]

I tried to read this while watching some stupid show on some stupid channel and everyone in this as I'm reading has valley girl voices.

Reread it with that in mind. DO IT.

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I'm not exactly sure what a valley accent sounds like and so I keep flashing back to Ally Hilfiger in that show 'Rich Girls' (which is way off the mark) and now the image of Kibum whining about how rich he is has got stuck in my head.

[astormisbrewing]

That, with Paris Hilton holding a Chahuahua, times two, only more annoying.

[lightly]

...that's kind of horrifying.

[freepureangel]

small typo?
But as Kibum jabs his sword at Kibum’s chest

[lightly]

Oh god. Thanks for pointing that out. In a chapter full of Kangin's and Kibum's I felt sure I was going to do that at least once.

[freepureangel]

no problem, X)

[lady_hanaka]

Lalalala! So, like Stormy said, we were watching an odd show that involved Valley Girls and Kibum was very much less threatening when he was suddenly in valley girl mode in my mind.

I liked this chapter. Very much liked it.

Poor Kangin, but Heechul has a right to be bitter and angry too. But they'll all be happy soon basking in the KangTeuk and HanChul and YeWook and EunHae and SiwonxSungmin love. When I made them a pairing they became Simin, and I giggled.

I feel a bit bad for Kibummie. I'll let him have a waffle now I guess. :D

Off to the epilogue...

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Oh poor Kibum, what show was this?

Yay, thank you!

When I made them a pairing they became Simin, and I giggled.

I giggled too.

Kibum might find it hard to eat the waffle now that he's lost his head. Poor Kibum, life is so unfair to him.

[yukichi_1004]

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
;_; but i'm worried about kangin...

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THANK YOU!

[shihan_ai]

OMG YES KANGIN FINALLY KILLED KITWATBUM!!!! and rescued jungsu of course~

i really liked the part where he was going through all the identities of immortals kibum had killed...esp henry and kibum...very interesting

LOL CHULLIE I LOVE HIM SO MUCH. way to greet your almost-dead friend lol. at least he's got hannie to make him feel better

<3

[lightly]

I liked the identity bit too, it was going to be longer - but it started going places that it would be hard to come back from.

LOL, bitter!Heechul is bitter.