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[lightyoubreathe]

so i pretty much suck at updating on time.  I've been busy the last week and a half  and then last night i thought it was monday night.  I'm finally updating so here's chapter 7 enjoy.  if you read please leave a comment with your thoughts i'm really curious about what everyone thinks

The next morning Jacquelyn woke abruptly.  Her cell phone was

Comments

[anonymous]

I like it i think alittle more description but other than i like it alot keep it up!! :D

from diesoz

[anonymous]

Seriously, I will catch this when it's first posted someday. lol Great work once again! I always forget how much I like this story until I get another chapter! The only thing I would suggest is that we've had plenty of allusions to Jacquelyn's past, give us some concrete details. It would really open up the story some more and give us moer insight into Jacquelyn's actions and why she interacts the way she does.

[hardcoresteamer]

I like it too. And I definately want more.
I'm waiting to see what really happened in her past to make her feel like she does. It must be something really bad if she keeps acting the way she does.