The Brief History of Us 4/4

[liiiiiiya]

Betrayal is the bottom of the ocean, where on the muddy seaweed base, it finds you sweltering, your tears mixing in with the salt water, burning your eyes as your lungs work and work for a taste of sweet air.

It is the sensation of floundering; you wander to the ocean floor with a mind absent of any hope, not knowing how to trust or who and the

Comments

[min_hart]

This was beautiful. I cannot express the level of emotions I felt throughout this. When Sehun's bit came up with his death on the news, I had to step away and cry. I'm crying right now as I'm typing because the story of transgendered Sehun just hurt me so much and how he died lonely and scared-my heart hurts so much. I could ask, beg for a second part where they find Baekhyun's mother, but I wouldn't want the mysterious and open-ending to be destroyed. This was beautiful, and I will never forget this fic. You pulled me in instantly and I don't regret reading this. Beautiful, and so tragic to the point where I don't know what I'm even saying; but thank you.

[mianhate]

Oh my god. I'm just so blown away by this. The intricacy of this. It just makes me feel so sad. Not because of the deaths or the occurence of the world ending, but just the reality of it all. All of the characters were hurt and broken in this. It made me sad because it was so realistically bitter and painful. And that's just how the world is sometimes. People die, hurt, cry, suffer. But there is still hope to be had, if I can gather that from your story. And that's what makes living worthwhile, I guess. Not to be fake deep and all... Your writing is unmatched. You have such a way with words, it's unbelievable. And you handled such dark themes incredibly. There were many sentences that stood out to me, but going back through this would inflict more pain on me and my heart isn't strong enough for that right now so I might come back later. I felt so bad(?) for Chanyeol in this because he seems so lost and he has been for so long. It hurts. I still have a little trouble understanding Kyungsoo (and Baekhyun)'s motivation for Lito (not

[beetricks]

Thank you for sharing this extraordinary, poetic piece of writing. You are truly gifted.