Five Times Two - Part Five

[likiel]

Comments

[gothabilly13]

Very clever and it has a great hook. I was snared from the start. Love the emotional transitions and the images you paint in words. Well done

[likiel]

Thank you! I'll let Lou (the artist) know that you liked her work ^^

[likiel]

Thank you so much for this wonderful comment! you had me all flustered girl! Thanks, I'm very glad you liked the "in reverse" effect, I couldn't imagine this story another way. knowing people enjoyed it makes my day ^^

Thank you again for reading and leaving a review <3

[laurathelurker]

Just want to echo everyone else, you did a great job and I enjoyed the backwards narration it gave an emotional resonace.

[likiel]

Thank you! It's a wonderful gesture to leave such a beautiful feedback; I'm very glad and proud you liked this story ^^

[hikinggirl70]

This was great. It was so coo to tell the story in reverse.

[likiel]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! <3

[cillab42]

This reminds me of a show called Redrum (okay jared didn't die) and it was wrtten very well, and when you get to the end (beginning) it makes you both smile and fret because you know what's going to happen. Well done.

[likiel]

*chuckles* Well, thank you! I'm very glad you liked it and I'm definitely gonna check this Redrum show up! ^^