Keep Smiling - G? PG? - slight Harry/Ginny

Jun 21, 2004 02:55

Woe is me, for my writer's block is cruel and unusual and I've never written Harry/Ginny before, despite my love for such a couple. Woe, I say! Woe!

Despite all the 'woe' and the fact that I never ever say that I love any of my writing, I do like where this piece went. And it's over a thousand words, so yay me!

Title: Keep Smiling
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leitha June 20 2004, 18:15:10 UTC
It's sad. And a little scary. But I like it.

It reminds me a lot of the fic I'm writing (well, supposed to be writing) where Ginny goes 'crazy'. Except it's Ginny/Draco not Ginny/Harry.

Harry smiling is a little... freaky. Just the 'he wouldn't stop smiling' lines set the whole mood for the story. For me, anyways. I'm amazed you could do that with such a simple line/lines.

Great story, though.

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spookykat June 20 2004, 20:54:55 UTC
You know, I'm not usually a fan of Harry/Ginny. Too many times it's OOC-Fluff that I just can't stomach, but this was beautifully written. And I especially like how "just keep smiling" keeps changing meanings throughout the peice.

Well done!

~SK

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vexia June 21 2004, 01:39:47 UTC
Wow.

I've never been one to like Ginny, but I am in total awe of this fic.

And. Honestly. I am utterly incoherent.

But, before I leave, I'd like to say that ending each scene with Harry always smiling was brilliant and had to be my most favourite part.

I suppose it's the chilling factor that appeals to me. :)

Hope that doesn't sound eccentric.

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hobbitheart June 21 2004, 07:28:43 UTC
I really liked that. So emotive and even a little bittersweet. It proves that you don't need to describe everything just to get the emotion across; sometimes it's the things you don't day that are the most powerful.

<333
Beautiful work, sweetheart, keep it up.

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