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lil_missb

FMA Fic - One Shot - Untitled (Proving Grounds)

Dec 11, 2005 12:59

As promised. I'll talk about my reasons for not liking it at the end.

Title: Untitled (Proving Grounds)
Summary: A little fib gets Ed in a lot of trouble with Winry. ‘She had no intention of seducing Edward Elric until that moment.’
Pairing: EdxWinry
Spoilers: Not really
Rating: NC-17

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Comments 3

sherlock_nomes December 13 2005, 01:42:07 UTC

I liked it. It's different but it's still great. Experimentation is the key to improvement, right? ^_^

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your side question.... lil_missb December 26 2005, 16:20:11 UTC

Yes, that Ed/Psiren fic, TAGR, is still in works. Unfortunatly, part two had to be put on hold for a while since RL got extrememly busy for me during the holiday season.

momoiro_usagi August 4 2006, 15:20:55 UTC

That was lovely! ^^ I'm sorry for the random comment, but I searched EdWin NC-17, and it brought me here. I thoroughly enjoyed this! Reading over the other comments, I have to agree that the mood did switch a little bit during the course of the story, but it worked. I love the way you wrote Ed, and the whole premise of his rivalry with Russell works perfectly with this! ^______^ Great job!

You have an EdxPsiren coming up? :O You'll post it in fma_het, right? ^^ I'm a huge Psiren fan!