2000 Miles Chapter 5

[lil_missb]

Title: 2,000 Miles
Summary: Two thousand miles and more ghosts than that to haunt them.
Pairing: EdwardxWinry.
Spoilers:Post series, so yeah. A little bit of an alternate ending. No movie though. Doesn't even exist.
Rating: PG - NC-17 This chapter: PG-13
FMA does not belong to me and I make no profit from any of these tales. Any further archiving

Comments

[loveeandpeacee]

YAY!!!!! New chapter!!!
*hugs new chapter and prances off to read*

[animelover_24]

It was nice, a couple of mispelled words and you're missing a few commas, but overall OK. I liked that part when Winry was trying to teach E to drive, that was cute! I look foward to future chapters so write again soon!

[amorphic]

I totally love this fic -- I'm so glad you managed to update so soon. Looks like you're keeping your goal by updating at least once a month! ^^

There are a couple of typos and tense errors, but, really, this is such a beautiful fic that you can just ignore them and wallow in the wonderfulness of EdxWinry!

I'm looking forward to more romance as well, I'm such a sucker! XP Hope you update soon!

[meepers_369]

Cute chapter~ some minor typos, like "A damn is about to burst inside of him" (I think you meant dam xD ), but overall very nice descriptions and nicely peaceful, flowing piece.

[oneangredwarf90]

this was a kicken chapter please update soon!! its really well written!
-lizz