2000 Miles - Chapter 6

Mar 26, 2007 16:27

Okay, here is March’s update and I am sad to say that I am unemployed again so I did something with this chapter that I really didn’t want to do, but I really wanted to keep my resolution so I had no choice. Chapters 6 and 7 were supposed to be one big chapter but I split that chapter up. I haven’t had anytime to write recently. I’ve got a job ( Read more... )

all, ed/winry, 2000 miles, fanfiction

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animelover_24 March 27 2007, 01:13:39 UTC
Wow! This chapter got REAL interesting! And a cliff-hanger! Yay! Though I kinda mind cliff-hangers, but hey, that's how you gotta write! So very supenseful! I really liked Winry's reaction to Ed's comment of "meaningless sex" she got pretty jealous. I agree with you, I really liked some of Winry's lines, not bad, actually! I look foward to reading more so write when you can, er... However it is your doing it. I read the top note, good luck with the whole job thing by the way.

-AnimeLover_24

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awsome chapter! littlechemist01 April 22 2007, 04:30:15 UTC
I really like the whole thing so far! But WInry in this chapter has topped it off, her lines are great and remind me of me...and well Ed, hes Ed, a 18 year old MALE virgin, how does he do it? hope to see more soon and I hope you sort every thing out, I feel you on that!

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loveeandpeacee May 13 2007, 20:23:44 UTC
I forgot to say when I first read it, I loved this chapter. ^^ It really shows off both of their personalites.

Now then, what I really want to ask.
Are you okay? I know it's weird having some unknown person on the internet who likes your fiction ask that, but... I don't know. I'm a little worried because you haven't updated [at least on here] in so long, and you told us about the job situation, and it was your resolution thing, and I just wanted to make sure you were okay.

Good luck with it all. ^^

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lil_missb May 17 2007, 17:45:11 UTC
yeah, I'm okay. Thanks for asking. I still haven't found a job and I've bumped that to the top of my priorities list. I've got a few more touches to put on chapter 7 and 8 is probably going to be the toughest chapter I write yet. On top of that, I haven't had the time to really sit down and work on it. So far I've just been picking at it for 5 minutes or so whenever the mood strikes me. don't fear though. I'll get around to finishing it. I'm not going to abandon this story.

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anonymous May 19 2007, 05:24:11 UTC
Oh, my. I knew she was gonna steal the car... baka. Uh, I've reviewed for you on ff.net before, but I came to see if you'd updated. Please tell me they get the car back. That was Winry's car, and I could see her getting homocidal over something like that. Good luck, and good work!

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Are you going to continue with this? littlechemist01 May 24 2007, 05:24:48 UTC
Just wondering are you going to continue this wonderful story? I hope so because it's one of the best one's I have read!

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Re: Are you going to continue with this? lil_missb May 24 2007, 17:04:39 UTC
yeah, I'm going to continue it. Its just that right now real life stuff takes precedence. I can't pay my bills with fanfiction. (but woiuldn't it be great if I could?) thank you for reading!

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I know the feeling... littlechemist01 May 24 2007, 17:15:14 UTC
Indeed. We would all be rich if we could! I wish you all the luck!

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