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Archive Post! FMA Fic - Understanding: Part Two

Aug 27, 2005 22:53

This is an archive post. This story was originally posted on Aff.net on June 17, 2005.

Title: Understanding
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Summary: Ed/Winry 'He was holding something back, afraid to show her what he needed.' WARNING: Rape/Rape Issues M/F

Author’s Notes: In all my stories, both partners are at least 18 years old. It’s ( Read more... )

all, nc-17, ed/winry, understanding, fanfiction

Comments 1

yuukihikari August 28 2005, 05:03:26 UTC

It was sort of painful to read; just the dry, emotionless routine of sex as a game, forcing themselves to leave out every aspect of passion. Trying to behave in a way they aren't. The longer the description about how they tried to play the entire thing as a game and nothing more, the more I felt bad for the both of them (especially since Ed refused to look at Winry). So, when Winry snapped Ed out of it and got to see the hidden emotions in his eyes, it was wonderfully relieving (even though the initial events were anything but positive).

I like seeing Ed open up to Winry. She holds that sort of trust with him, it's different than the kind of trust Ed has with Al.

Poor Ed.

I think that's my favourite line, 'poor Ed'.

Oh, one more chapter.