FMA Fic - The Alchemists Guide to Relationships Part One: Lust - Chapter Five

[lil_missb]

Title: The Alchemists Guide to Relationships Part One: Lust
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Summary: Join Edward Elric as he attemps to navigate the winding roads of adult relationships, with mixed results.

Previous Chapters: One Two Three Four

Notes: M/F, romance, drama, angst. AU and slight OOC (since it takes place three years after

Comments

[csakuras]

;___; Poor Ed...as if he needed any more emotional scars...

[fullmetal_cute]

*also known as the Mad Fan Girl*

*puts more offerings down at the author's feet and waits for the next part* It was a very good twist, in my oppinion. You've got me hooked.

[inksmears]

Aiiieeee! How sad, how sad! I've read this story on Adultfiction.net, but never reviewed. ^^; So I thought I's start reviewing. The idea of ClaraxEd was weird for me at first and it still kinda is, but I still :heart: this story! Poor Edo. I don't feel sorry for PSiren, though. ^^; Anyways, I look forward to part 2! I'm crossing my fingers for possibly EdxWinry at some point. ^_~ Great job!

(Speaking of EdxWinry, are you ever going to continue your other fanfic about them? "The Sexual Adventues of Ed & Winry" I believe it was called? ^^; )

[saturnstars]

lol! Yukina! You're everywhere edxwin is, like me!

Anyway, I love this story, and I love what you have done with it. Ed and Clara don't belong together... now I'm just wondering whats going to happen. Poor Winry seems like she is trying to be strong for him... will Clara show her face again?

[inksmears]

LOL! Indeed I am! EdxWinry is life, man. -.-v Although I dunno if this counts as EdxWinry? ^^; I'm hoping it'll turn into that. But I love this story anyway. Missb is an awesome writer, no?

And I forgot to mention I liked the part with Havoc entering the bar, hearing Winry, and fleeing. The girl strikes the fear of God into all men, doesn't she? Kinda like Riza. XD

[saturnstars]

yes she does! I will try update my fic soon for u sis! but try update yours too okay?

[baby_kitty_toes]

I'm really enjoying this story, though at the beginning i was abit unsure about it. I was nearly positive you were going to make it too OOC and have it be overly sappy with no concern for the fact that clara was a theif and liked being a theif.

Great ending to the first part. the betrayal was great and i'm sure that'll add an interesting turn of events to any type of relationship ed might have in the future.

[lil_missb]

Thanks. It was one of my fears that people wouldn't make it past the first few chapters without being turned off.

the betrayal was great and i'm sure that'll add an interesting turn of events to any type of relationship ed might have in the future.

Yup, it's what carries part two and inadvertently segues into part three. You'll see what I mean.

Another great chapter

[anonymous]

Hey Lil_MissB. This is TVO (TheVileOne) from AFF here at your invite.

Just wanted to say, love the latest chapter, albeit it made me very sad :( .

Not sure where you are going to go with it now. But if it gives us some Ed/Winry action ;) , I'd be totally cool with it.

The Vile One

Re: Another great chapter

[lil_missb]

Hey TVO, I'm glad that you could drop by!