FMA Fic - 2,000 Miles - Chapter 2

[lil_missb]

I love my new story!

Title: 2,000 Miles
Summary: Two thousand miles and more ghosts than that to haunt them.
Pairing: EdwardxWinry.
SpoilersPost series, so yeah. A little bit of an alternate ending. No movie though. Doesn't even exist.
Rating PG - NC-17 This chapter: PG
FMA does not belong to me and I make no profit from any of these tales. Any

Comments

[miki05]

AH I see, so Ed did get his arm and leg back...Al died doing so. How sad. =/

Keep writing!

[moinkys]

First off, I love your layout!

Ed and Win is my favorite couple. I get kind of frustrated though cause I have a hard time finding good fics that do the couple justice. My goodness, you are defiantly grabbing my interest. I am pretty excited about this fic. Write more quick! It seems awesome and original.

This is probably the most down-to-earth version of the characters personalities I have seen also.

<3

[sherlock_nomes]

Man, this story is awesome! Ah I can't describe. Just the dry feeling of it and the way you depict their environment completely reflects the tension between them and their emotions. Absolutely marvelous! I like the comment about Ed not having the energy to do anything anymore and Winry's distress over it. Very nice, keep it up! XD

[evil_little_dog]

Still enjoying muchly. Love the moths fluttering around the sign - it's a nice touch of description!

One typo - the third section starting with, "The inn was further down the road...." - the second sentence, I believe you mean "pining" rather than "pinning".

[lil_missb]

Thanks for catching that. There are just some things that spell check, grammer check, and three read throughs can't catch.

Anyway, it's now been fixed.

[evil_little_dog]

No prob. I think in a former life, I was a copy editor. *grin*

[nakotaco]

I am thoroughly enjoying this. Again, loving the description; it's all very easy to picture in my mind. I love the way you round off the chapter. Looking forward to the next one! :D