the start

[lil_noble13]

this is the begining to a story i'm writing, i seriously pulled it outta my ass two minutes ago......

She drove her Jeep to the ridge located approximatly 10 miles from her home in Marriot, Pennslyvania. She got out of the car and sat on the hood facing the sunset staring blankly into the pinks and purples of the summer twilight. Her left hand

Comments

[_nightbringer]

Heck no. You have to finish it! I'm intreged. I want to know what happened to make her do that. And what happens after. Grr. I want to read more. You really do have a talent for writing, love.
*darkstorm

[lil_noble13]

heh thats what i hate about my writing. i write the frist few paragraphs and never finish, kinda like that cutter one

[keepwishin]

yes u have to finish darkstorm was right it is so good so far. i love it

[__fades_away]

I like it. But I think you should go into more detail about what's going through her head. Maybe other things that shes sees while sitting on the car. You could definately make that paragraph longer. But I like the plot...if you can have a plot for just a few sentences.