The man of her dreams: Chapter 2 - The art of persuasion and of faking accidents

Aug 27, 2009 19:36

As promised I hurried to upload the next chapter. I already had chapter 2 written when I uploaded the first, but I wanted to read through it a few times to correct mistakes or to add some ideas I had. 
I had a hard time finding a title for this Dx I still don't like it.

title: The man of her dreams

rated: T
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bar_ohki August 27 2009, 21:24:31 UTC
Hehe, I can't wait to see what happens when Hiruma coms in to shake things up.

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lila_libelle August 27 2009, 22:19:03 UTC
^___^
I hope I can live up to your expectations

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bifacial_ler August 28 2009, 20:27:44 UTC
I'm liking this.
I quite frankly don't know why. There might be a chance the reason is my drunkeness.
But I'm interested.

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lila_libelle August 29 2009, 15:46:41 UTC
LOL, Maybe I should get my potential readers drunk then.. tempting...but no x)
I hope I'll be able to keep the story as interesting it is^^ In my opinion the first two chapters are ok but the real story hasn't begun yet. I'm a bit worried that the rest may not suit your taste but we'll see ^^ Nevertheless I hope you'll keep on telling me what you think about it :)

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