The man of her dreams: Chapter 3 - The return of the devil

[lila_libelle]

This was a difficult one...

title: The man of her dreams

rated: T
(I'm not sure about the rating since this is my first real FF, but I guess it's T.)

summary: In their third year Mamori suddenly finds herself being soppy on a new student. Meanwhile Hiruma has work to do in America. How will he react when he returns?

-Return of the king devil-

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Comments

[bar_ohki]

Pretty good. ^^

[lila_libelle]

thanks ^___^ I know it's not perfect but it's the best I can do at the moment. I admire all the more other FF authors. It's not that easy to make the characters credible.