Fic: Zweifelhaft

[lilac28]

Title: Zweifelhaft
Author: lilac28
Pairing: HJ/CM and $B/MM
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I wish I could write something as amazing as Watchmen. Sadly I did not.
Notes: I've been trying to learn German for the last few months and so I couldn't resist this prompt from the kinkmeme: HJ talks German during sex with Nelly. I am by no means an accomplished

Comments

[initial_aitch]

How utterly enjoyable!...for ALL of us voyeurs watching (the watchmen) through the glass! Charming and sexy and funny all at the same time. Excellent use of speaking-German-during-sex. Glad you’ve been studying up on dirty talk :)

I adore Byron’s courage-summoning. ‘Atta boy, Mothman. Love the line about Nelson the prissy cocksucker, and Nelson getting off was just really really hot! Well done, as always.

[lilac28]

Thanks so much! Your lovely comment really made my night. The voyeurism potential in Watchmen is just infinitely exploitable, and all the popularity of the Minutemen in fic is quite tasty. Never have I seen fic writers do more with less background on the characters.

Heh, and I haven't been studying that much dirty talk. (No, really!) I think I blew my Deutsch wad with all I know up there. Now I need a German friend to practice with. Unfortunately, I live in the middle of nowhere so it's hard enough to find English speakers that I like!