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[VK] Shades of Grey - Chapter 4

Jul 04, 2010 16:09

Title: Shades of Grey
Rating: T
Word Count: 8,279
Characters/Pairings: Zero, Misaki, and more OCs
Warning: Abundance of OC, which was rather inevitable, considering the setting. The appearance of vengeful!scheming!powerful!Zero. Esterhazy is a real life figure in Hungary, and I took the liberty of borrowing the family to my story. I hope no one minds.
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revised version, shades of grey, vampire knight, vk, zero, misaki

Comments 6

shapby July 4 2010, 13:14:26 UTC

Bwahahahahaa xDDDD so I assume THIS was what you were doing on your laptop before you went home? And here I thought you were playing that game on Facebook.

This was the chapter that I liked because of the medical research thingee going on. I also like how you pictured Zero as a ruthless man as he tore the Gentleman down.

So yeah, well, next chapter, hand it over when you've done some light editing on it beforehand please. :D

lilac_ayame July 4 2010, 13:54:13 UTC

You speak as if you don't know me. I played that game thingie on FB and posted this chapter in LJ. I've always been quite a multitasker.
Don't worry. I shall edit it first before I give it to you.
Glad you like the chapter. Can you drop by FFnet, so it's not too lacking of reviews? XDDD
I'll drop by your new chapter when you're done with it ;)

shapby July 4 2010, 13:58:05 UTC

My new chapter IS up, btw.

Yep, okay. Otw to ff.net~ review booster :D

teruame July 4 2010, 21:22:15 UTC

:D I already commented on the ff.net site, but...this was so prettehs! *__* I like the way you described the actions, and the momentum of the story is just overwhelmingly beautiful. There is an atmospheric beauty to this fanfic that I would love to learn from (then again, it's written by you, so I should expect such beauty XD).

*HUGS YA* :3 Zero is indeed a ruthless man when it involves danger to his close ones...

lilac_ayame July 4 2010, 21:33:19 UTC

Your reviews are always expected and greatly appreciated, they told ne what makes my stories interesting or what parts are appealing. Such as.. Looks like everyone likes ruthless Zero huh?
I'm glad you like the revision too.
And well, if you have time, I wanna know why you suppport this pairing of Zero and Misaki; and the unmade pairing of Hiiragi and Tsuna. I'm really curious. :D

miyas July 12 2010, 15:28:03 UTC

I love this story. But I must read with the dictionary, because little I understand in English.:D
I am waiting for the continuation. I hope that it will be quickly.