The time, a void

[lilacblossoms]

Title: The time, a void
Fandom: Big Bang
Pairing: Seungri / Jiyong
Rating: PG
Word count: 630
Disclaimer: This is pure fiction
Summary: In which Seungri and Jiyong maybe are too alike to notice.
A/N: For oxygenlove because she asked me to write G-ri and because this is kind of inspired by her drabbles about future. Written while listening to this awesome song.

Comments

[oxygenlove]

SPOT ♥

[oxygenlove]

Okay, really, now. Where do you get these sentences? How do you string these words to create these sentences. /drools over them sentences

I tried listening to the music while reading. It feels so - heavy. Like something's weighing me down. And I felt like I wouldn't be able to reach the end. /shivers

I love the part where Seungri walked in the rain, and the man asked for his autograph. And where he threw Jiyong's phone - ♥

And I kind of hated Seunghyun when he commented that.

And...

Your mind is lightyears ahead of us

THIS. THIS SO MUCH.

This is much loved ♥

[lilacblossoms]

I did want to give the story a little more substance but I've been thinking about writing this kind of floating fic for a while now, and oh, how I liked searching for those sentences!

^ Meaning: Thank you for mentioning it! ♥

The Seungri in my mind is already somewhere else, way ahead. (I'm probably reading to much into it, brainwashed by his panda eyes, stammering and general awkwardness.) It's like he doesn't fit into Big Bang yet he is most definitely the glue that holds them together. Hmm, that would make a good promt now when I think about it.

Writing Gr-i was actually really entertaining once I got started, thanks for the encouragement!

/scoops up your compliments and goes to cuddle with them. ♥ ♥

[oxygenlove]

Yes, the sentences are damn gorgeous. ♥

panda eyes, stammering, general awkwardness - the things we all fell in love with :)

prompt! /nods head vigorously

or as he's said, he's the seasoning which makes Big Bang's flavor complete :) Or if we'll translate that to Seungri-language: Big Bang will be bland without him
Though he also said that too much of him can also make the flavor go bad /sad

Yes, G-Ri is a fun couple to write. But I've noticed that you mostly wrote ToDae before. I should get to reading those :)

Much ♥

[aishiteru_amie]

i should read again.
early in the morning at the office makes my mind stupid.
but at a glance i felt the angst but in the end, there's a rainbow.
does that make sense for now?
i shall come back later.
forgive me.

[lilacblossoms]

What is there to forgive? I'm just happy you read it at all. ♥

And yes, the rainbow, it's there all right. The day I write 100% angst is the day the sun gets the shape of a square.

You, btw, have a good job when you can read fanfiction during work hours. Or maybe you're that sneaky employee I'd never dare to be? :P

[lilacblossoms]

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reading. :D

[papersanguine]

That song was a perfect addition to your fic. I listened to it while reading and some how it make it all the more poignant.

The flow of this fic..it's just so free. I really feel like i just read something that can only be compared to running water. Sorry, if that's kind of weird. :D

Anyways, it was wonderful.

[lilacblossoms]

I wanted it to have a sort of floating feeling but your association to running water describes even better what I tried to create. Thank you for taking your time to comment. ♥

[bluemonkiesx]

whut. why did I never read this? TELL ME TELL ME WHY?!
this is. beautiful, in an incredibly poignant and angst-that's-not-really-angst-but-still-angsty kind of way.
and omg, reading it while listening to the song too, omg. I'm just...speechless really. I missed reading GRI fics ♥

[lilacblossoms]

I don't know but I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT! :DDDD

Actually I haven't been able to write in this way after finishing this fic. No idea what happened. DX

I'm actually re-reading some of your fics right now. I absolutely adore the one about kisses that are never planned and never perfect. /sigh I wanna be 14 and ridiculously in love again when I read that one.

[bluemonkiesx]

OF COURSE I LIKED IT ♥ HOW CAN I NOT LIKE GOOD GRI FICS :DDDD

omg ngl, that happens to me all the time. my fic, Twelve Days? I can't write like that anymore and it's horrible because I need to finish it D:

omg asdfg are you really?! lol. aww, I actually like Never Planned and Never Perfect LOL. idk, writing fics for Krizza makes me happy HAHAH.

[lilacblossoms]

Haha writing for her makes me happy too! I don't know how many fics I've seen dedicated to her. She is like the queen g-ri shipper in the whole fandom. :D