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[lilazndude8552]

I just dropped dead and took a nap after school today.
It was totally friggen awesome.
Then it started going downhill when I had to wake up.
I think I expended all my energy just trying to get up.
It sucked.

Waking, by John Kobawoo

*thank you, thank you... yes i know its such the coolest poem ever*

Comments

[wutubinsmokin]

That's a really interesting rhyme scheme.

[lilazndude8552]

Yup yup, I call it the.. uhm... Iambic Kobometer.

[kerosene_kisses]

grand, my dear old boy!

[muhshenunsahnai]

Dude.
It sucks.
:p

[white_remus]

I always knew you were a true poet at heart. :P

[mintpatch]

Dear John,
I hope you don't dream of becoming a poet.
Because dear friend, I hate to tell you this,
but it's not quite Robert Frost.

A Letter, by Beibei Lin

:) just kidding.

[cancantina]

hahaaha, that's great

[lilazndude8552]

Ouch, I'm hurt, Beibei. Your such a meanie... but that was pretty good hehe.