Ah ha hah! Nice. I saw it coming but it was still pretty good. Her fury was priceless. I wanted to see whether Adrian bolted or walked up and talked to her. ^_^
I do have one tiny problem with it, though, when you say, "the arcade seemed to merely look back silently at him," because it's too clunky. The arcade only needs to blink silently back at him; it doesn't need to seem to be doing anything. And I'm mentioning that only because the people looking at your portfolio will notice it, too, and I want to save you some trouble.
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I do have one tiny problem with it, though, when you say, "the arcade seemed to merely look back silently at him," because it's too clunky. The arcade only needs to blink silently back at him; it doesn't need to seem to be doing anything. And I'm mentioning that only because the people looking at your portfolio will notice it, too, and I want to save you some trouble.
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