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May 18, 2005 22:06


Life is boring...

Here is a poem...or w/e

Ive sat in my room now

Almost everyday just wondering

How are you

How am I

Do you think of me

Are you doing better

I miss you

Do you miss me

I wonder if i still am feeling the pain from what you did to me

Even if it wasnt on purpose

Does it still bug me for not even i know now

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anonymous May 20 2005, 23:24:03 UTC
that was a really bad poem... i would not advise trying to get into writing, because by the looks of that poem you would fail horribly.

not only did some lines not make sense it was written poorly and it needs desperatly to be revised.

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Wasnt a Poem lilducky429 May 20 2005, 23:36:41 UTC
For one i wasnt trying to write a decent poem it was more just to get stuff off my mind...And two i know it isnt good i write better than that

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