i have been listening to some music and daydreaming, i wanted to tell erik all the stuff that has been goin on inside my head, but he told me to write it down so here it goes
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Woohoo! Kire's not the only one who can write.erikireJuly 25 2005, 03:10:14 UTC
So apparently, you have some talent in the field of writing as well. I'm VERY impressed little Duck. This piece reminds me of some of the older writings I used to have. It may have a few run-on sentences and puncuation/fragmenting issues, but otherwise. Its solid stuff.
I really enjoyed reading it, especially the way you had Jesus' speech patterns. Mine are usually of Jesus speaking few, if any words. And I like your interpretation more because Jesus WAS a speaker.
Re: Woohoo! Kire's not the only one who can write.lilducky4godJuly 25 2005, 03:12:49 UTC
haha ur compliments are..flattering to say the least. i am glad you enjoyed it though, i just couldn't keep the feelings i had when i listened to this inside, and i'm grateful you sorta inspired me to write it by sitting me down and saying "go write now!" and wouldn't listen to me rant about it. thanks Kire, it means a lot.
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I really enjoyed reading it, especially the way you had Jesus' speech patterns. Mine are usually of Jesus speaking few, if any words. And I like your interpretation more because Jesus WAS a speaker.
Good job Duck. Don't doubt your abilities.
~Kire~
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