[Fanfic / Secret Santa Gift] (Im)mature Love

Dec 29, 2010 23:45

My gift for macht_schnell for the meinbruder Secret Santa! I hope you and everyone else who reads it likes it, even if just a little bit!

Title: (Im)mature Love
Characters: Germany/Ludwig and Prussia/Gilbert
Rating: PG
Warning: Blood
Prompt: "Hurt/comfort, lots of fluff - one is injured, the other one helps the other feel better, AU or canon."
A/N: This story. It is ( Read more... )

meinbruder secret santa, fanfic, hetalia

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mykonos2 December 30 2010, 09:00:12 UTC
Oh boy... where do I start...

Horses, hunting, young!Germany... Seems like you merged all things I love together. I won't deny, a liiiiittle bit more of kissing or such things would be really nice, but I love the story already as it is &hearts don't listen to me, I just always want them to be a pair haha

"He couldn't help wonder, however, just how he would get on without his brother."

Not gonna lie - this one made me stop and think for few minutes. I love the line so much. One of the best lines in Germancest stories I ever read actually.

Thank you SO MUCH for sharing this, and yes, you should definitely write more. I'm adding this to my rec-list...

P.S. icon couldn't be more appropriate - Prussia and little!Germany riding on a horse

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lilhowlet January 2 2011, 01:02:49 UTC
Horses, hunting, and young!Germany are a favorite set of mine. \o/ I had considered adding more kissing, but I liked how the innocent fluff developed with just the one. Prussia and young!Germany are my weak spot for cuteness. >w> Plus I save real kissing for slightly older!Germany.

Y-You flatter me! That sentence there is kind of the big concept I love the most about Germancest. :'D Their relationship is really endearing!

Thank you for reading it and I'm glad you liked it. >w< And are even adding it to a rec list...! I was so nervous when I posted, so seeing your response made me feel 1000x better. Ahaha. <3 Thank you for the encouragement!

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macht_schnell December 30 2010, 17:27:27 UTC
Whaaa this is awesome! You're an amazing writer >W< And a brilliant first delve into the Hetalia fanfiction community, if I do say so myself~ And yes, I'd love to see more =D EspeciallyifitsmoreGermancest.

I loooved thiiiis *w* Little Lutz is adorable, trying to impress Gilbert and all. I couldn't really find anything to crit, since it was everything I asked for, plus awesomeness in the form of amazing writing, so! I say keep on keepin' on and thank you ;w; <3

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lilhowlet January 2 2011, 01:13:48 UTC
*RELIEF GOES HERE* I was so worried you wouldn't since I included things that I personally liked and was all "I hope she likes this kind of stuff too...! ;A;" when I was editing it.

Soooo glad you loved it! <3 *Flails happily* >w<

On a side note: your third prompt. I've been wanting to write that prompt so you might see it in the future. :'D

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historical and good and oh my! drcalvin December 31 2010, 11:32:19 UTC
This was so good I read it at work. During my break, but still - sign of captivating fic ^^;

An imagination was quickly something Ludwig was quick to judge as being overrated, what with Gilbert's actual idea of 'just the two of us' involving just the two of them with enough space between them to fit in the Brandenburg Gate on good moments and the Cologne Cathedral on bad ones.

This picture is perfect!

I love your language and you characterize them both really well. Very funny, quite dramatic at times, and a lot of moments where you feel the emotions between them =) Excellent first fic, I look forward to reading more Hetalia things from you ^^

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Re: historical and good and oh my! drcalvin December 31 2010, 11:41:01 UTC
(hope it's okay if I friend you, btw? I read your trick or treat posts and they were all so cute, so I'd like to e-stalk keep reading your stuff it that's ok ^^)

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Re: historical and good and oh my! lilhowlet January 2 2011, 01:24:59 UTC
Pfft, during break at work still counts as being at work. 8D I'm honored you would spend it reading this.

Thank you very much! Such all encompassing compliments, I'm really flattered. ;u; I will do my best to write more (hopefully) awesome Hetalia things in the future too!

(I don't mind at all! <3 Now I get to stalk you and your fics in return. ;3 )

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