All Eyes On You, R, James/Logan

[liliako]

Title: All Eyes On You
Fandom : Big Time Rush
Pairings: James/Logan, Tinybitof-Kendall/Carlos
Wordcount: 2,650 
Rating: R for language/themes
Disclaimer: I do not own anything and I don't know anyone personally, this is a work of fiction.
Summary: They don’t do it very often.  It’s not like a regular thing and it started out really awkward.  Disregarding

Comments

[shisou_eimin]

so did i ever tell you that Carlos is my favorite part of this? like, way to miss the point but i love how distraught he was that they weren't really dating and then the way he just kind of bounced back form it when he found out they weren't really having sex XD

i also love the progression from just watching each other to actually making out while they jerked off. and you know i just love everything about your writing ♥

thaaank you for writing this for me<3<3<3 even though i had to wait forever for it lol

[default_dollie]

I agree with shisou_eimin. The mutual masturbation was hot, especially when it turned into kissing and Logan helping James get off, but Carlos was just so damn precious with his beliefs and how sad he was that James and Logan could do that with each other without emotional feelings.

“That’s like practice kissing! Kendall did that with me once!” Ha! Best lines of the fic in my opinion. I also loved how Kendall reacted after James offered to let Carlos in on his and Logan's sessions. “It’s okay, you two seem pretty busy, we’ll work it out!” I'm sure you will, Kendall. I'm sure you will.

And the last line? Most people don’t get a boyfriend out of their roommate walking in on them jerking it, so Logan called it a win. I guess James and Logan finally got a clue about their sexuality, huh? :)

[garnetice]

I am dying from laughter at Carlos. Omg. ADORE.

[kapvik]

Aw, cute and hot. I always get a kick out of an awesome side-character Carlos in fics about a pairing he's not involved in (I get a kick out of Carlos in pretty much any fic, but that's beside the point right now). It's like a free gift with purchase.

...which is why Logan strictly watches scenes with mostly light haired blonds or bright red heads because they don’t remind him of anyone he knows.

Except blond Kendall, I guess. Logan's subconscious can't be blamed for wanting to jerk off to vague Kendall lookalikes, eh? Nudge, nudge, wink, wink, say no more?

I realize you probably emphasized light blonds to differentiate from Kendall, but I couldn't resist. Too much potential for Kogan subtext in that one line in a Jogan story. :p

[squoctobird]

Just the image of James and Logan jerking off at the same time in the same bed is almost too much to handle...

Carlos is precious.

And Kendall.... "we'll work it out" I sense secret motives Kendall.