41. Fanfiction: Hypothetical Situations

Nov 09, 2008 21:11

Title: Hypothetical Situations
Author: Liliths_Requiem
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Molly Weasley, Bellatrix Black
Pairings: Molly Weasley/Bellatrix Black
Era: varies
Word Count: 692
Prompt: 100quills 49. If

Between What Is and What Could Be )

molly weasley/bellatrix black, bellatrix black, molly weasley

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traces_of_being November 11 2008, 12:04:11 UTC
Beautiful. As always, you've made my week. My absolute favourite line that seems to catch my breath everytimre I read this is:

"Instead, they're caught on that line between love and hate, and everytime Molly breathes she can feel her chest implode and heart break."

So stunningly tradgic. There are no words for how much this touches me. I think I may *fangirl you a bit to be totally honest.

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liliths_requiem November 11 2008, 13:22:11 UTC
Aw, I'm really honored you like my writing so much. It always makes me giggle when you leave comments.

That's probably the best line in the piece, I'm kinda proud of it, especially for the slant-rhyme.

I'm really glad you took something from it, and I don't mind the fangirling :D

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daydreaminchic November 21 2008, 16:50:30 UTC
oh my. This is my first molly/bella fiction, and I am astonished. How can people never write about them?
You captived me and broke my heart more than once with this fiction. Congratulations.
It is good indeed to find a good author, and you felt like a refreshing cold breeze in a lazy Sunday afternoon :)

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liliths_requiem November 21 2008, 19:46:55 UTC
Thank you, that comment made me blush several times.
Molly/Bella isn't really popular. I've only found it once or twice outside of my own work, and in those Bella was torturing Molly. I'd love to see this 'ship grow but I don't think there's enough interest.
Your metaphor made me smile.

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daydreaminchic November 22 2008, 02:41:41 UTC
You're welcome!

The metaphor was the best I could think of. It remembered me of my childhood days, when it was hot and lazy after having lunch at my grandma's. Not quite enough to take a nap nor to go outside and play, but the perfect moment to lay my head on grandma's lap and listen to her stories.

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daydreaminchic November 22 2008, 02:42:46 UTC
oh my, I am way too much poetic these last weeks. Sorry about that!

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