oh my. This is my first molly/bella fiction, and I am astonished. How can people never write about them? You captived me and broke my heart more than once with this fiction. Congratulations. It is good indeed to find a good author, and you felt like a refreshing cold breeze in a lazy Sunday afternoon :)
Thank you, that comment made me blush several times. Molly/Bella isn't really popular. I've only found it once or twice outside of my own work, and in those Bella was torturing Molly. I'd love to see this 'ship grow but I don't think there's enough interest. Your metaphor made me smile.
The metaphor was the best I could think of. It remembered me of my childhood days, when it was hot and lazy after having lunch at my grandma's. Not quite enough to take a nap nor to go outside and play, but the perfect moment to lay my head on grandma's lap and listen to her stories.
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"Instead, they're caught on that line between love and hate, and everytime Molly breathes she can feel her chest implode and heart break."
So stunningly tradgic. There are no words for how much this touches me. I think I may *fangirl you a bit to be totally honest.
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That's probably the best line in the piece, I'm kinda proud of it, especially for the slant-rhyme.
I'm really glad you took something from it, and I don't mind the fangirling :D
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You captived me and broke my heart more than once with this fiction. Congratulations.
It is good indeed to find a good author, and you felt like a refreshing cold breeze in a lazy Sunday afternoon :)
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Molly/Bella isn't really popular. I've only found it once or twice outside of my own work, and in those Bella was torturing Molly. I'd love to see this 'ship grow but I don't think there's enough interest.
Your metaphor made me smile.
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The metaphor was the best I could think of. It remembered me of my childhood days, when it was hot and lazy after having lunch at my grandma's. Not quite enough to take a nap nor to go outside and play, but the perfect moment to lay my head on grandma's lap and listen to her stories.
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