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Shades of Black Regulus/Emmeline

Jul 31, 2009 23:39

Title: Shades of Black
Author: Liliths_Requiem
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Emmeline Vance, Regulus Black, Sirius Black, Marlene McKinnon
Pairings: Emmeline Vance/Regulus Black, Emmeline Vance/Sirius Black, Marlene McKinnon/Gideon Prewett, Fabian Prewett/Caradoc Dearborn
Era: October, 1980
Word Count: 2188
Story Summary: There is only one person ( Read more... )

sirius black, emmeline vance, emmeline vance/regulus black, regulus black, emmeline vance/sirius black, the first order

Comments 6

jadecharmer August 1 2009, 05:14:40 UTC

Wow. I hate you in a way that means I actually really love your story because it was truly amazing, incredibly well-written, and completely and totally sucked me in and had me invested in a way that makes me hate you because now I'm in a total emotional upheaval.

Wow. Really, I wish I could offer you a thorough critique on everything I loved about this fic, but I feel like I'd just be repeating the whole story to you. Emmeline, even though there's so little about her in the books, is exactly the way I picture her and I absolutely love how you've written her. And I find Regulus daunting to write because there's so much potential with him, but you've channeled all that potential into a wonderfully flawed character.

Again, wonderful job. The writing style you chose, with the straightforward ( The authorities find his body six hours later, flayed and tortured ) is absolutely perfect for this fic. And yeah, I'm totally going to stalk your tags now, lol.

Thank you for sharing this.

liliths_requiem August 1 2009, 14:26:14 UTC

Thank you. I'm really glad this was able to draw you in because I meant for it to be haunting and I always seem to fall short (in my mind) at achieving that. I strongly suggest anything bella/molly or katie/flint because those are probably my best works. (I work well with Slytherins because I can relate to them.)

It's reviews like this that make me have faith in my writing, so thanks for sharing your thoughts.

accioamber August 1 2009, 06:01:40 UTC

Heartbreaking. Best fic I've read all night. Wow.

liliths_requiem August 1 2009, 14:23:58 UTC

I'm really hoping you read alot of fics last night. Thanks for the sweet review, you made me blush.

jadecharmer December 22 2009, 06:57:39 UTC

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liliths_requiem December 22 2009, 14:15:29 UTC

Thank you thank you thank you. Now I need to write more of this pairing, as I've forgotten how much I love them.