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MASH Hawkeye/Trapper The Thing Is

Nov 13, 2009 22:35

Title: The Thing Is
Characters: Hawkeye, Trapper, BJ
Pairing: Hawkeye/Trapper
Rating: PG-13
Length: 1714
Summary: Post-Ep for “Welcome to Korea.” The boys try to figure out how to live without each other, but the thing is, they can’t.

( The Thing Is )

trapper mcintyre, hawkeye pierce, mash, hawkeye/trapper

Comments 12

__itsawarinhere November 14 2009, 05:24:48 UTC

This is one of the most beautiful pieces of writing I have ever read. Everything about it: the syntax, the word choices, it's all so beautiful. I wish I had more to say, but I'm just shocked. I needed to read something like that. Very powerful.

liliths_requiem November 14 2009, 12:55:01 UTC

I think that may be the nicest thing anyone's ever said about my writing. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.

lemmesay November 14 2009, 13:10:37 UTC

Great story, I loved it. There's not enough Trapper/Hawkeye stories.
Don't take me wrong, I love BJ to bits... but he's not Trapper and never will be.
And really, that explains everything. BJ is like a watered down version of Trapper, just like California is the watered down version of Boston.
And that's it.
Thank you for writing this<3.

liliths_requiem November 14 2009, 16:13:30 UTC

Aw. You're welcome honey. I'm a North-East girl myself (Jersey) so I have a deep loyalty to Boston. And I love Trapper, much more than BJ, so he gets more love.

the_summoning_d November 14 2009, 17:29:07 UTC

This is a thing of beauty. Brilliantly done.

liliths_requiem November 15 2009, 05:12:59 UTC

Thank you <3

aelora November 16 2009, 22:19:02 UTC

I went searching for some Trapper/Hawkeye, not believing I'd actually find anything. Then I found this, and I really don't need to look anymore because this satisfies everything. Thanks for writing it!

liliths_requiem November 17 2009, 13:54:20 UTC

Aw. That's a huge compliment, really, considering there's at least a hundred other fics on Hawkeye and Trapper. (And there's no smut.) I'm so glad you like it. Thank you!

oldgentleman November 23 2009, 21:12:37 UTC

Thank you for posting this. Your writing is strong and concise: the story packs a punch and each word has purpose. I was looking for the sort of story that would stay in the back of my mind for days, and I found it.

liliths_requiem November 24 2009, 03:51:47 UTC

Thank you, knowing that it's stayed with you for days makes me very happy. I think that's what all writers want, really.